My Struggle Premiere Contest Winner

Though I may struggle day to day
With those who strive to live
I too must learn a better way
To teach my heart to give

To live my life beyond myself
With love and empathy
To push my cares beyond the shelf
Of what is good for me

I know the path of greater light
Is learning how to care
To understand the folks who might
Be living with despair

To recognize my brotherhood
Is shared with one and all
To contribute the way I should
By lifting those who fall

The journey of the heart may be
A long and winding road
But when you give unselfishly
You drop a heavy load

The difference in the way you care
And how you follow through
Is measured by the greatness
Of the heart that beats in you.



Written and submitted June 25, 2021
For the “Jaundiced Eye Poetry Contest”
Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/25/2021 6:19:00 PM
Hi Bryan, What a beautiful poem. It touched my heart reading this. Your poetry flows like a gentle river. Cheers Anne
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/25/2021 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Anne. Have a great . . . pancake supper! Bryan.
Date: 7/4/2021 9:34:00 PM
Very good work, my friend. So many great lines. I'll just pick one. "But when you give unselfishly, you drop a heavy load". Congratulations.
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Date: 7/2/2021 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Bryan written with open eyes of compassion and heartfelt sharing of perception and a wish for all to "give unselfishly." Very nice!
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Date: 7/2/2021 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, a fine write.
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Date: 7/1/2021 11:48:00 PM
The journey of the heart may be A long and winding road Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/1/2021 11:53:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your kind words. Best wishes, Bryan.
Date: 7/1/2021 11:13:00 PM
Some sage advice we could take to heart. Congratulations on your top win, Bryan.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/1/2021 11:43:00 PM
Thank you. I'm pleased to share my tidbit to this universal concern. Best wishes, Bryan.
Date: 7/1/2021 10:31:00 PM
Bryan, thank you for participating in the contest with this delightful read. Congrats on your win! Do have a look at the next contest ‘Tat Tvam Asi’
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/1/2021 11:51:00 PM
Hi Unseeking Seeker. Thank you for sponsoring this contest, and for recognizing my contribution. I enjoyed being able to write for this contest. Best wishes, Bryan.
Date: 6/27/2021 1:35:00 PM
I am trying to think of the name for this type of poetry (kind of like a morality lesson, it's a form one can use here) You did very well with this challenge, my friend.
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Date: 6/26/2021 7:11:00 AM
WoW! Superb thoughts. Wish all thought like you. Your poem is repeated twice. Have a wonderful weekend friend.
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