My Story

As I turn the page of my life story
I cant help but look back,
To memories long lost and buried
In my brain like Tack's.

I turn the page again to see
Who i used to be,
A loving, Little, Wild me
When I was still free.

I read my way through painful trail's
Thats when I start to feel,
That my life turned into prison
I held this inner hell.

The next chapter begins the same as the last
Life has now become a chore,
That's no way to look back
It feels like someone closed my door.

A few more pages down the drain
Surounded by the darkness,
Life is one unlawful game
I feel the world now equals pain.

Now im here, as far as written
Empty, Hurt, and Forbidden,
I am sick with peace starvation
Thinking death is Salvation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/26/2011 8:19:00 AM
Dylan, this is a beautiful piece of work. It flows in a lovely mannor, and tells a sad story similar to my own. I hope things have improved for you.
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Date: 2/11/2011 10:13:00 PM
i really love the style by which you tell your story but don't think about your last line please, because they say you must never say die
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:38:00 PM
a good flow of rhyme, deep write, enjoyed reading this one Dylan,..p.d.
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Date: 1/23/2011 9:57:00 PM
Dylan, wonderful poetry even though it makes me sad..if this is reality for you, then I pray that don't give up and don't give in to it. Stay strong because you're worth more than the darkness, the errors, everything that's holding you back from attaining peace...forgive yourself first and don't look back except to see where and how you stumbled and decide how to go from there, my friend...we are all struggling, daily so don't feel alone! God bless. Always, Annalise
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