My Stolen Concern

When I open my eyes,
She forces them back shut,
There’s something she hides,
I know naught of what.

My anxiety grows,
My corrupt cognition,
Part of me knows,
This is my attrition.

I’m too scared to think,
Too scared of the possibilities, 
That she’s on the brink,
Of revealing her hostilities.

I fear my emotions,
Are misguided at best,
Though she’s gained my devotion,
My heart she has wrest

She only wants power,
Attention from a soul,
Whether it’s something she earned,
Or something she stole.

She’s breaking my heart,
Slowly and surely,
I’m falling apart,
So insecurely.

I love her too much,
I’m becoming dependent,
But love is my crutch,
It’s become too ascendant.

I need my life back,
Regain my control,
To end my life’s wrack,
And regain what she stole.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 11:33 AM
love can be extremely painful, this poem is a great expression of that.
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January 6, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Love love love this poem!!! I feel your pain too. It's so sad when you love someone who doesn't feel the same or take advantage of your love. Please Keep Writing. ~Brittany
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October 18, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured! ~Trudy~
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October 15, 2009 at 5:26 PM
Hi James, Congratulations on your feature of the week. Lainie.
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October 12, 2009 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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October 12, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured the week! Enjoyed the read. Love Light Truth Patty
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October 12, 2009 at 3:31 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week James. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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September 29, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Interesting topic here. Love gone wrong. Keep writing. Sara
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September 29, 2009 at 11:09 AM
Hi James a really great poem, I have been here and come out the other side I love the expression and wording and the title is so apt. May I also thank you for leaving your kind comments on my own poem. Thanks Allie
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 9:21 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us James. Love, Carol
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