My Star

Of all of the things
I like about you best,
that one special thing,
your, "apart from the rest".
Our creative adventures
are hands down, by far,
the best of my best times,
which makes you my star.
 
My former forevers 
found paths of their own,
each playing their part
in the ways I have grown.
There's so much of me
I would never have known
had I not let my heart
take its chances when shown.

With a precedence set
of what to expect 
disappointment was easy
to learn to accept.
Sharing my passions
was only a dream
and fairly uncommon, 
or so did it seem.

It was after the breaking
and building of me,
you came to unlock
what's inside with your key.
One specially made
to be used in due time,
to finally see 
my life's reasons in rhyme.

My creative companion, 
my, "never to be"
was suddenly sharing
a lifetime with me.
How could I appreciate 
such a rare find,
without having first lived
with a much different kind.


At times I'd reflect and wish 
we had more past,
especially now 
that the years go so fast.
I was being prepared
to be where you are,
here in my heaven
embracing my star.

                -Jeannie Minor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/10/2023 10:06:00 PM
Is it ok if I pretend this is for me? I could sure use the boost:) Hi Jeannie, I miss you:(
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 3/12/2023 12:40:00 PM
Consider it a long overdue gift my friend, I miss you too
Date: 6/11/2016 7:14:00 AM
Simply beautiful Jeannie..."great" work...god bless...^WW^
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 6/13/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, my warrior friend. I appreciate your truly kind and gracious response to my email. I have decided to create an audio journal of my poetry for my biggest fan, my mom.
Date: 5/22/2016 2:52:00 AM
and don't be afraid to check out the corporal world either, the stars are not the limit for you. Have fun with everything out there basic and otherwise. I once told a person to write a poem on the breaking of a wishbone.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 6/13/2016 10:33:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and the comment Karl.
Date: 5/20/2016 11:51:00 PM
I was teasing, pretending it was about me! :)
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 5/21/2016 12:44:00 AM
It is.... she just doesn't realize it yet!
Date: 5/15/2016 12:32:00 AM
Your not so bad yourself! thank you! :)
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 5/15/2016 11:40:00 PM
Not sure I understand, but, your welcome?
Date: 4/10/2016 9:31:00 AM
such great craft shown here Jeannie, puts one in spell catching all our attention, so specially encapturing. blessings, Gordon
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 4/10/2016 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon. You always bring me a smile.
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