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My Star

Of all of the things I like about you best, that one special thing, your, "apart from the rest". Our creative adventures are hands down, by far, the best of my best times, which makes you my star. My former forevers found paths of their own, each playing their part in the ways I have grown. There's so much of me I would never have known had I not let my heart take its chances when shown. With a precedence set of what to expect disappointment was easy to learn to accept. Sharing my passions was only a dream and fairly uncommon, or so did it seem. It was after the breaking and building of me, you came to unlock what's inside with your key. One specially made to be used in due time, to finally see my life's reasons in rhyme. My creative companion, my, "never to be" was suddenly sharing a lifetime with me. How could I appreciate such a rare find, without having first lived with a much different kind. At times I'd reflect and wish we had more past, especially now that the years go so fast. I was being prepared to be where you are, here in my heaven embracing my star. -Jeannie Minor

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Date: 6/11/2016 7:14:00 AM
Simply beautiful Jeannie..."great" work...god bless...^WW^
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 6/13/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, my warrior friend. I appreciate your truly kind and gracious response to my email. I have decided to create an audio journal of my poetry for my biggest fan, my mom.
Date: 5/22/2016 2:52:00 AM
and don't be afraid to check out the corporal world either, the stars are not the limit for you. Have fun with everything out there basic and otherwise. I once told a person to write a poem on the breaking of a wishbone.
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 6/13/2016 10:33:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and the comment Karl.
Date: 5/20/2016 11:51:00 PM
I was teasing, pretending it was about me! :)
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 5/21/2016 12:44:00 AM
It is.... she just doesn't realize it yet!
Date: 5/15/2016 12:32:00 AM
Your not so bad yourself! thank you! :)
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 5/15/2016 11:40:00 PM
Not sure I understand, but, your welcome?
Date: 4/10/2016 9:31:00 AM
such great craft shown here Jeannie, puts one in spell catching all our attention, so specially encapturing. blessings, Gordon
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 4/10/2016 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon. You always bring me a smile.