My Star

I'm going shopping for a very special star
I'll travel to the end of the world no matter how far
I want my star to be big heart warming and gentle
Because these are qualities in my husband that I feel
I want to give you this very special star
Because in my eyes that's exactly who you are
I want my star to shine bright each and everyday
Like the smile on your face when you look my way
I want this star to be a symbol of my appreciation and affection
Because with this star you can always feel our powerful connection
The top of the star will represent my love for you
The corners will be for the love of our children too
The bottom will represent family like a family tree
Because that is how special you all are to me
My star is called the family star because 
It makes you feel good all around
When you pick it up it gives you such a special feeling
Makes you never ever want to put it down




FOR SHINING STAR CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/20/2010 9:28:00 PM
I am happy to see you DID place with this great poem!! congratulations. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/20/2010 12:47:00 PM
This was really good, Faleshia. I haven't had a chance to see all the entries/winners from that contest, but darn if you did not win in it! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/20/2010 5:51:00 AM
A very sweet star you have , with a beautiful name you gave it. Have a nice one..p.d.
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Date: 4/19/2010 5:26:00 AM
Very sweet Congrats Felesia
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Shining Star poetry contest Faleshia. Love,Carol
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:27:00 PM
Congrats Faleshia on your success in my "Shining Star" contest.. excellent write and thankxxx for supporting my contest..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/17/2010 8:43:00 AM
This Faleshia is a beautiful poem that speaks of your love for your family so superbly! Good luck in Linda-Marie's contest. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my works. Hope you have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:38:00 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Written with love and I hope that your husband receives it with thanks...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work... ..Sara
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Date: 4/16/2010 1:47:00 PM
What a beautiful poem..how lovely...so so beautiful..Charma
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Date: 4/16/2010 1:32:00 PM
I really like the idea of a family star. What an uplifting view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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