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My Spiritual Journey

as i seek the greater truths
along the journey of life
i learn how peace
and gratitude go hand in hand

my quest follows a trail of hills and valleys
surprises around each corner
with its share of gains and losses

i can say i knew true love
and for a while shared the path
of life, of wisdom and spirituality 
he passed away in my arms
giving his last breath
i handed him over to a universe
greater than the sum of its parts

and now alone again i must find a way
to pick up the pieces and go on without him
to follow the road where it may lead
gaining whatever precious trinkets
of spirituality that i may find



Read on air by invitation  ~  March 27, 2021  'LATE NIGHT POETS'

AP: 2nd place 2021, 3rd place 2026

Submitted on January 6, 2021 for contest MY SPIRITUAL JOURNEY sponsored by UNSEEKING SEEKER  -  RANKED 5TH
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Mcguire Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 9:17 PM
We are with you Miss Line on your journey. You will never be alone and always loved. Your words will speak of your spirit long after we are all gone. And people will still love you and your words because you have spoken to their hearts. Your love words have power. One hundred years from now this poem will still touch a heart and cause a person to stop and count blessings. That is your talent! How lucky we are.
Gauthier Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 9:55 PM
Thanks you so much for your kind words, Timothy ~
Kaufman Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 7:47 AM
its truly a great blessing to be with some one as they pass. My heart goes out to you at your time of loss.
Gauthier Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 9:00 AM
absolutely a blessing indeed, especially when it is so peaceful and loving ~
Kauffman Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations Line on your win! Your words convey your openness to life, the courage with which you now face each day and your abiding faith as a woman of the word. Thank you for this beautiful example of an open heart. Prayers and hugs!
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 12:46 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated comment, Sam ~
Agustin Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this insightful spiritual journey of yours. God bless you.
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 8:59 PM
Thanks, Beata. Much appreciated ~
Roper Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line. Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 8:59 PM
Thank you, Eve ~
Goldsmith Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. You are so creative. A Wonderful write. May you find peace and be richly blessed. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.............
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula. Most appreciated~
Watt Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:08 PM
Line, you have always written beautifully of the spiritual realm and your journey. There is always a calming essence to your spiritual writing as you seek peace and the highest virtues humanity can offer. Blessings on your pilgrimage, and congrats for your win with this delightful write. Thank you for your many lovely comments at my page today ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. What a lovely thing to say ~
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 10:41 PM
Line a lovely poem and heartfelt emotions! Congrats on your win!
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:00 PM
Thanks, Krish. Much appreciated ~
Seeker Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Congratulations on your placement! Thank you for participating in the contest and sharing your poignant experience. Transcendence is within
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:01 PM
Thanks for the lovely contest ~ a wonderful inspirational challenge.
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Your poetry has taken off, Line. This poem is so moving, so intimate. Bravo, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2021 at 4:36 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated comment, Gershon ~
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