My Spinning Stars

The sky is my home, shining with light
The moon is my mirror and the planets my eyes
Even heavenly Venus is nowhere as bright
The white dwarves and red giants spread my beauty with their cries
Jupiter thunders and red light dances
The stars cry in triumph as they go supernova
Bright flashes of fire like an armored knight's lances
Blinding in brilliance like a gold hypernova
The Milky Way trembles as it turns in time
Flashing with passion and tormented in place
The wrath of red Mars smolders in line
As it circles and flies across outer space
In all of the universe I reign over the large and small
But our galaxy will always be my favorite out of all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Singh Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 11:32 PM
Very nice . Very thoughtful.
Breedt Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 2:33 AM
Hi Ally,.lost in the stars are my favorite place too. Great imagery here. You go girl
Schultze Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:20 PM
Thank you so much!! Don't worry, we all mess up our tenses once in a while!! :)
Breedt Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 2:36 AM
Sorry i meant is my place. My tenses -urgh
Green Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 5:17 PM
really nice, I enjoyed this
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