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My Spinning Stars

The sky is my home, shining with light The moon is my mirror and the planets my eyes Even heavenly Venus is nowhere as bright The white dwarves and red giants spread my beauty with their cries Jupiter thunders and red light dances The stars cry in triumph as they go supernova Bright flashes of fire like an armored knight's lances Blinding in brilliance like a gold hypernova The Milky Way trembles as it turns in time Flashing with passion and tormented in place The wrath of red Mars smolders in line As it circles and flies across outer space In all of the universe I reign over the large and small But our galaxy will always be my favorite out of all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/16/2017 11:32:00 PM
Very nice . Very thoughtful.
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Date: 5/14/2017 2:33:00 AM
Hi Ally,.lost in the stars are my favorite place too. Great imagery here. You go girl
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Ally Schultze
Date: 5/14/2017 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much!! Don't worry, we all mess up our tenses once in a while!! :)
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/14/2017 2:36:00 AM
Sorry i meant is my place. My tenses -urgh
Date: 5/5/2017 5:17:00 PM
really nice, I enjoyed this
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