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My Spin Toy

When little my spin toy gave me great joy,
watched its multi-colored fan spin and toil,
now its a pain,
drives me insane,
shows up on computer just to annoy.





11-14-16

childhoodcomputerhumorlimerick

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

November 19, 2016 at 2:30 PM

That pesky spin toy really does annoy, Cheryl. Funny poem to enjoy. TFS. Love you my poetic friend.

Cheryl Hoffman

November 19, 2016 at 5:18 PM

At times I wish I were a pinwheel wizard, so I could make the pinwheel disappear into a blizzard! (Huh?~):)

Lim'Rik Flats

November 15, 2016 at 8:59 AM

:-) you fooled me - I thought your wind toy would be a musical instrument, behind... cheers and chuckles! ~ j

Cheryl Hoffman

November 15, 2016 at 9:06 AM

That lil' pinwheel likes to show up, especially when I'm posting a poem and drinking my morning cup! Thanks lim'rik!:)

Chris Green

November 15, 2016 at 7:31 AM

That was really funny. I didn't expect that final line and when I read it I could not contain my laughter. Really nicely done Cheryl

Cheryl Hoffman

November 15, 2016 at 7:36 AM

Thanks for your visit and kindness Chris! Glad I could make you laugh!:)

Judy Ball

November 15, 2016 at 12:08 AM

Ain't it always the way. You get something you think you will love and it just lasts a while and then it starts to annoy you. This is a cute little limerick. Nicely done. God Bless, JB

Cheryl Hoffman

November 15, 2016 at 6:55 AM

Thanks for your visit and kindness Judy! God bless, Che