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My Spin Toy

When little my spin toy gave me great joy, watched its multi-colored fan spin and toil, now its a pain, drives me insane, shows up on computer just to annoy. 11-14-16

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/19/2016 2:30:00 PM

That pesky spin toy really does annoy, Cheryl. Funny poem to enjoy. TFS. Love you my poetic friend.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/19/2016 5:18:00 PM

At times I wish I were a pinwheel wizard, so I could make the pinwheel disappear into a blizzard! (Huh?~):)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/15/2016 8:59:00 AM

:-) you fooled me - I thought your wind toy would be a musical instrument, behind... cheers and chuckles! ~ j

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/15/2016 9:06:00 AM

That lil' pinwheel likes to show up, especially when I'm posting a poem and drinking my morning cup! Thanks lim'rik!:)

Chris Green

Date: 11/15/2016 7:31:00 AM

That was really funny. I didn't expect that final line and when I read it I could not contain my laughter. Really nicely done Cheryl

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/15/2016 7:36:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and kindness Chris! Glad I could make you laugh!:)

Judy Ball

Date: 11/15/2016 12:08:00 AM

Ain't it always the way. You get something you think you will love and it just lasts a while and then it starts to annoy you. This is a cute little limerick. Nicely done. God Bless, JB

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/15/2016 6:55:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and kindness Judy! God bless, Che

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/14/2016 11:11:00 PM

Both fun and sorrow ... Yesterday never the same as tomorrow ... Enjoyed your Limerick ...

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/15/2016 6:54:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and kindness Probir!:)