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My Speechless Heart

You are my heartbeat, you are my soul Without you, my life became sorrowful In my eye you are the moon-light In my dream which always fight Your face is not face, another moon Perhaps the beauty of you, moon took loan Your lips look made of a peel of rose You are my poem and you are my prose In a peep of second, you stole my heart You are my sweet doll, sweety sweety art You are my dream-girl, you are my heroine I am your king and you are my queen

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/6/2024 11:53:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2016 3:12:00 AM

SUBHASHISH MOHAPATRA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/24/2016 12:21:00 AM

Lovely first post Subhashish, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@