My Souper Girlfriends

I met them once I landed in a place, 
they called it haven, a soiree place. 
Where people are nice,kind and cool. 
Some are young, some are....never mind. 
They're awesome people!

I first met this blonde lady,thought she's only twenty.
She did refused, said she's almost a mother to me. 
I beg to disagree,'cos she's more than just a mom. 
She's a bestfriend, she's wonderwoman. 
She lives in Norway,Anne Lise Andresen was her name. 

There goes a new avatar,who came to visit on my land. 
She's wearring sunglasses,but can't hide the beauty from behind.
Then I found out lately, she doesn't just own a pretty face.
She is the sexiest and hottest momsie,rockin' up poetry.
She's a real poet master,SkAT A.,that's her name! 

One day I sat down and read some poetries, 
So delightful,inspiring, and awesome pieces. 
I got struck to what I've found. 
A Filipina who's writing with charms, 
Her poems are incredibly great, 
She's Nette Onclaud, the goddess poet! 

I came to land another page, thought at first that's a cage. 
Of a tigress with full of angst and strength. 
I must admit, though I was afraid, I admire all the pieces she had made. 
She left the table and threw the soup,and think tha'ts the last time I'll see her poem. 
But with revenge she went back home, and send me greetings that I treasured. 
With friendly comment I came to know, this tigress is tame and a sweet person. 
Who is she?...the everbody's love and favorite, Poet Destroyer!

As time goes by, and my journey went long.
I had to passed in different stations.
I came to know so many beautiful people,
So kind and thoughtful, their arts are treasures.

There came to visit my poem one day, 
Though full of greiving,they cheered me so well.
They are Mary Jo ,Eileen, F.J. ,Vie and Shadow.
The women who are pride of this site.
The pretty ladies who always been there to lift you high.

Above all these awesome experience,
Is to know the people from my own motherland.
My country fellas, so sweet,cool and nice.
They are the crystal flowers glisten brightly like a star.
They are Leonora, Maria Paz, Nikko and Carole...

My day became brighter, you light the path I walk.
Everytime your greetings knock on my door.
Allow me to do the honor to thank you guys.
And let you all know how thankful I am.
My dream has came true, because of this site.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/5/2015 10:41:00 AM
Awesome poem...awesome poets...a great tribute to the friendship and these women. Loved this, Aiyah! Rock on! hugs
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Date: 5/26/2015 5:55:00 PM
Aiyah, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 2:14:00 PM
thanks SKAT for a kind visit in my land :O))
Date: 4/24/2014 3:22:00 AM
Hello Aiyah! This is very thoughtful tribute that you wrote, and I am sure all the ladies you mentioned here are as touched as I am-- I am really touched that you included me there, as I am hardly here. Sorry ha since I rarely am able to comment on your poems...But you are so sweet to do this and it is so wonderful when we get to exchange hi's and read other's poems. Super init ngayon 'no? I hope you get to relax and unwind and thank you so much again for writing this!Mabuhay ang mga Pinay :)!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/24/2014 8:53:00 AM
Hi Nikko... Thank you!! as in much thank you!!! ..ha ha..you don't need to visit and comment on my poem so often..once, twice.. that's all enough for me to know that one person is deserving for a thoughtful tribute.. hehe.. And I thank you, Nikko for complementing my poem when you landed once on my page... :O)
Date: 3/30/2014 11:28:00 AM
awww, this is so sweet. I adore some of these poets of whom you have written . Nikko particularly. she was one of the first to welcome me to soup. her heart is pure gold!!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/11/2014 3:30:00 PM
Hi Andie... Sorry I just saw it today ;) ..Thank you for this comment.. YEs! .. They 're so sweet... especially YOU!!! ^__^
Date: 3/27/2014 11:43:00 PM
These are all, some of the people here who inspire everyday to keep on believing in ourselves and each other...this is a fine tribute to the spirit of them and soup..thank you...
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/28/2014 7:35:00 AM
ThaNk you ,Donna... :')) and you are one of those inspiration!! ..thanks for this comment.. I appreciate it a lot!! ..:')
Date: 3/27/2014 4:12:00 PM
nice.. nice... proud of you kabayan! :D hahahaha God bless you in thousand ways.. :) and hope to see Philippines soon.. :D +===OLIVE :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/28/2014 7:34:00 AM
he he.. lol.. OLIVE.. thanks for the visit, friend!! ;')) Keep safe wherever you are.. ^__^.. PH is fine.. waiting for another rainty days to come... and swim in the flood!! ... :O((
Date: 3/26/2014 2:53:00 PM
What a lovely poem of dedication to some fine ladies in this wonderful Soup Family! I can tell by your kind comments, that you deserve these friendships, and the beauty of your avatar, (which is gorgeous!) goes within your heart as well !! Thanks for your comments to my poems!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/26/2014 3:00:00 PM
Oh CArrie... such a pleasure on these words.. Thank you for this delightful comment!!! ...And I'm happy to add a new name on their list... you are all my inspirations!! ...thanks for your visit my dear... :')) oxoxox
Date: 3/24/2014 8:51:00 PM
Hi Sweetie, you're such a delight. YEAH! To me:) PD..... LOL, I love your spunk. I think we have a cute history, you and I.... hehehehehe! I remember, the day I gave your first poem, a very lllllaaaaatttteee WELCOME........... I was trying to be cute:) I hope it worked. Your poem is very charming, a keeper in my book. xox.... Sending hugs.... Linda
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/25/2014 7:08:00 AM
Hey there PD dear... :')) oh wow!!! ...i didn't expect this kind of response... lol... you are the sweetest, kindest.. the saint???...that's over.. lol... I love you, PD!! ..thanks for inspiring me... !!! ^_^ here's a biiiiigggg HUG!!! labyaH!! :o)
Date: 3/24/2014 8:33:00 PM
I love the Lady Ink Crew! J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/25/2014 7:10:00 AM
you're the Lady's sweetheart, J.A.B.!! thenchooo!!! :o))
Date: 3/24/2014 7:11:00 PM
Thanks for the mention, sweetie. you have mentioned some fine poetesses here. Each one with a distinctive style. You add to the beauty and joy of the place. Hugs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/25/2014 7:13:00 AM
Ei sweet EileeN.. it's my pleasure to have your comment!!! ...you're one of the nicest person I knew here in PS.. ThaNks for everything!!! ^__^ big hug for U!! ^^__^^
Date: 3/24/2014 4:27:00 PM
Hi, Aiyah, a nice lovely poem. I had fun reading, how your soup life comes with great meaning. I'm happy to be part of it... Sweet Hugs, to you. I'm gonna have to call you Girlfriend now... With a friendly tone... ha-ha :) ~love ~SKAT~
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/25/2014 7:16:00 AM
Haloooo SKAT...oh, you're so sweet "gurlfreynnnnd"!!!! ..is that how it should be???...lol... tHaNk you for reading and commenting on my poem.. .. my gratitude to you and all the souper girlfriends here in PS!! ...labyaH!!! *__*
Date: 3/24/2014 3:02:00 PM
gosh, you make me blush with joy, aiyah... i am glad to be part of your world and to share my musings with you.. thank you; a splendid write tugging the heartstrings.. ang galing ng mga pinoys!. huggs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/24/2014 3:11:00 PM
i therefore call our group here.. "Pinoy Poetry" ..lol... Thanks Nette!!! ..i'm so glad that it touched your beautiful heart... you knew I loved you ever since we first met... you're my ultimate idol in Poetry world... such an honor to know you..^_^
Date: 3/24/2014 1:16:00 PM
- Oh ..... dear, sweet, kind, my good friend, AiyaH ..... you really touch my heart !! - I loved you yesterday --- Now I love you even more :))) - An honor to be your friend - thanks for your beautiful words to me, in your poem!! - A beautiful poem !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/24/2014 1:24:00 PM
Sorry.. this is the only way I knew to repay your kindness ,Anne Lise.. I hope I made it well.. Thank you for loving me... :o)) ThanK you for always being there... ^__^ big hugs!!!! (^_^)
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