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My soul's not your to keep

You mangled my life for games of chance creating madness within a carney realm feasting on my thoughts tampering with my mind crushing me chest ripping my heart out stomping on it raising your brow devouring soft edges leading to my soul attempting to block the entrance way to wholesome goodness reaching the height of my existence only to be balanced above it all falling into the trapeze nets crawling clawing reaching for my soul tattered and torn yet you couldn't reach it as i drift into a deeper sleep sorry satan my souls not yours to keep

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Date: 4/30/2024 3:30:00 AM
Great poem, it speaks loud and clear. I really feel this poem.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/30/2024 4:25:00 AM
Thanks a bunch many blessings.
Date: 4/24/2024 9:23:00 PM
Dear Yolanda, What a cool poem, and you have developed it so well right to the last line. I love the suspense of thinking you are referring to some jerk of a guy, when it is actually satan you are referring to... who of course IS a jerk of a guy. So, glad you got victory. Keep the faith! Carol Louise
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/25/2024 3:35:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness many blessings.
Date: 4/22/2024 6:24:00 PM
It's difficult to compose dramatic monologue and when someone does, it becomes very authentic as each and every syllable comes directly from the touched soul!
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/23/2024 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much have a blessed day.
Date: 4/21/2024 5:26:00 PM
I love and enjoyed reading your wonderful poem my dear poet friend. Your poem shows your strong faith and stregnth to resist the evil. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and you writings. Thank you as well for reading and commenting on my poem. Hugs
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/22/2024 5:47:00 PM
Thank you for your compassionate comment many blessings.
Date: 4/21/2024 3:47:00 PM
Wow Yolanda ,such a powerful poem , your words spoke to me , such an excellent poem , I know exactly how you feel . Danny
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/22/2024 5:46:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness many blessings.

Book: Shattered Sighs