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" MY SOUL " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of rose

My Soul Vi

My soul, a ripe fruit resembles

Ready to fall from the tree of life

Onto the ground of eternity

Ending thus my existence strife!









© Demetrios  Trifiatis
       24 August 2022

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Michael Tor

August 28, 2022 at 7:38 PM

A favorite Demetrios. One of your finest works. I am surprised no POTD this is incredible Poetry with such great meaning and conclusion eloquently expressed in this metaphoric style of brilliance. Wow!!!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 25, 2022 at 10:51 AM

- Thank you for allowing me to join you on your poetic journey ... fruit should be enjoyed ... not dropped on the ground, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 26, 2022 at 2:12 AM

I understood what you meant in your poem - I meant : I enjoy your "fruits" (wisdom and love)... and it would be sad to lose them... "falling down on the earth of eternity" ...no one lives forever here on earth ... but, it hurts to lose your dear friends - Have a wonderful day :) - thoughts // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 25, 2022 at 1:14 PM

My dearest, Anne-Lise, when I say " My soul a ripe fruit resembles" is a Metaphor, therefore, it simply means, that taking into consideration my age, am ready to pass into eternity as ripe fruit is ready to fall onto the ground. The soul when ends her journey, her mission, is ripen and falls onto the ground of eternity where is judged according to what has done on earth. Thank you for your lovely visit! REMEMBER: The soul is not a fruit but a part of divinity that comes from divinity and returns to divinity! Blessings!

Susan Ashley

August 24, 2022 at 5:49 PM

Dear Demetrios, indeed, one's soul does ripen on the tree of life until it fulfills its Earthly goals and lets go of the bough. Your poetic expression is rich and your photo is beautiful. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 24, 2022 at 10:34 PM

How wonderful to receive your warm visit and comment, my dearest Susan. Thank you so much. Blessings!

Sotto Poet

August 24, 2022 at 10:03 AM

Dear, Demetrios Your words are precise and to the point. In reality, nothing lasts forever on Earth; we are more like guests or travelers who must depart when their stay is through. God's blessings on you

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 24, 2022 at 2:33 PM

My dearest friend, Lasaad. I am so glad to see you. Thank you for your precious comment!

Valsa George

August 24, 2022 at 6:12 AM

No one can say when our time comes ! Though we wish to cling on to our life here, the thought that an eternal life awaits us at the other end makes us less apprehensive of our final good bye. May God strengthen and bless each one of us. Stay blessed, sweet friend !

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 24, 2022 at 2:32 PM

Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, dearest Valsa. Blessings!

My Soul Vi

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