My Soul Smells of the Wind

... My soul smells of the wind Which rolls across the plains Swoops over endless waters Caresses ocean waves It picks up thoughts and scents Along its endless way Some particles and leaves Which swirl and dance and play My soul smells of the wind Which brings awaited rain Transporting missing prayers And unexpected change It whispers then it howls Does never rest or stop Deposits in my soul Sweet molecules of hope My soul smells of the wind …
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Adams Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 3:37 PM
I love the wind. Your poem does a great job of creating the deep feelings it pulls from us, Miroslaw.
Sulkowski Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 1:52 AM
Pleased to meet you Cona, and thanks for your kind comments. Yes, there is something about the wind, the feeling of freedom to start with :)
Guzzi Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 4:14 PM
A charming innovative verse. Light & Love
Sulkowski Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 2:23 PM
Thank you Debbie. I'm really pleased you liked it:)
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Very sweet poem Miroslaw
Sulkowski Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Thank you Brenda
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 3:28 AM
beautifully penned with wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Sulkowski Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Thank you Jan
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October 19, 2014 at 12:19 AM
Miroslaw, congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a beautifully crafted piece. Verlena
Sulkowski Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Verlena
Kayode Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:08 AM
It is nice to see this perfection on the winning list,congrats Miroslaw
Sulkowski Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:59 PM
Thank you. I'm honoured
Yvonne Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Nice Write! Congratulations on your win.
Sulkowski Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:59 PM
Thank you Maurice
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