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My Soul Smells of the Wind

... My soul smells of the wind Which rolls across the plains Swoops over endless waters Caresses ocean waves It picks up thoughts and scents Along its endless way Some particles and leaves Which swirl and dance and play My soul smells of the wind Which brings awaited rain Transporting missing prayers And unexpected change It whispers then it howls Does never rest or stop Deposits in my soul Sweet molecules of hope My soul smells of the wind …

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Date: 2/23/2015 3:37:00 PM
I love the wind. Your poem does a great job of creating the deep feelings it pulls from us, Miroslaw.
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 2/25/2015 1:52:00 AM
Pleased to meet you Cona, and thanks for your kind comments. Yes, there is something about the wind, the feeling of freedom to start with :)
Date: 12/2/2014 4:14:00 PM
A charming innovative verse. Light & Love
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 12/4/2014 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Debbie. I'm really pleased you liked it:)
Date: 10/20/2014 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Very sweet poem Miroslaw
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 11/4/2014 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Brenda
Date: 10/19/2014 3:28:00 AM
beautifully penned with wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 11/4/2014 1:56:00 PM
Thank you Jan
Date: 10/19/2014 12:19:00 AM
Miroslaw, congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a beautifully crafted piece. Verlena
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 11/4/2014 1:57:00 PM
Thank you Verlena
Date: 10/19/2014 12:08:00 AM
It is nice to see this perfection on the winning list,congrats Miroslaw
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 11/4/2014 1:59:00 PM
Thank you. I'm honoured
Date: 10/18/2014 8:53:00 PM
Nice Write! Congratulations on your win.
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 11/4/2014 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Maurice

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