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"Untwisting all the chains that tie the hidden soul ..." Quote by _John Milton _________________
there is no roadmap for the ... voyage to my soul ... to find my authentic self the spiritual part of me needs to converse and soul is waiting behind this world I seek my spirit, heart, essence, core (my soul) ~ enlightenment is a pebble in the gloom, a fragile seed, a lone prayer to the vast darkness of passages and contrived corridors in my mind ~ so I fall into deep quietude where I can communion with my higher mind asking who am I meant to be, what is my purpose, who should I be I hunger in the silence ... for an answer ~ life is a stage, a fiddler and I, a lone dancer, where words in garish colors float and crash with withered memories in the dripping grey forest of my mind ~ perhaps God is the divine source to my life, my feelings, values, thoughts Oh, I am lost in a shoreless sea where my soul is disembodied, a separate thing (some think it even survives death) I have many scars on my roadmap ... I ponder ... life can be a fairytale ... or a ravaged garden it is a "choice" to make ... by self ~ I hear a quiet voice clear as dripping rain and my life stretches before me like an open road where old ways sail away in ships ... like sleeping swans .... and wisdom is the jewel I have found in ~ "the ragged meadow of my soul" Quote by- E. E. Cummings ______________________ January 05, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/my soul is a shoreless sea Copyright Protected, ID 01-1419-221-05 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, In Conversation With Our Soul sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 01/06/2022 Ninth Place

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Date: 1/11/2022 10:52:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. Thanks for this. God bless you.
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Date: 1/12/2022 4:49:00 AM
Beata, thank you for the compliment and congrats ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/7/2022 10:18:00 AM
Very beautiful Constance. Congratulations on your worthy win. New year blessings my friend. xxoo
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Date: 1/7/2022 5:37:00 PM
Connie, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/7/2022 8:05:00 AM
Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/7/2022 5:38:00 PM
Christuaj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/7/2022 1:19:00 AM
Written in your inimitable style, Constance! The title itself is so spiritual! Thanks for sharing and congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2022 5:39:00 PM
Seeker, thank you for the contest and inspiration and for my placement and the compliment and congrats ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/5/2022 10:25:00 AM
.."with withered memories in the dripping grey forest of my mind.." this line gave me goose bumps...this is a majestic tour of a "soul search", wonderfully written Constance
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Date: 1/5/2022 3:48:00 PM
John, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment, that line just came to me ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/5/2022 9:50:00 AM
....love the title.....shorelesss?....ah no......you cast waves of droplets as alphabet particle spheres.....sounding as notes....up-on-at...most sphere-river winds....to settle once more and noted as.......sweet music rains.... stans sand....(do i run on or, do i run on...)
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Date: 1/5/2022 3:50:00 PM
Stan, thanks for visiting my poem and for your poetic comment, always a pleasure ~ friendship and poetry _Constance