My Soul Cries Joyful Tears: Written With Mike

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My wondrous love, my soul cries joyful tears,
when i do feel your heart beat against me.
As i hold you close, gone are all my fears,
and our glory i know shall ever be.

Your siren eyes they do call to my heart,
in the depths of my soul your song does sing.
From the heart of your eyes i shall not part,
all my love and care to you i shall bring.

In the depths of my love beauty i see,
you are the beauty, the light of my soul.
In your embrace love so gently can be,
ever in echoes your love is my goal.

Ever i know throughout all of my years,
my wondrous love, my soul cries joyful tears.
                      ~   ~   ~

What fulfilling love through the years we've shared
Our hearts pulse as one though age takes a toll
With no other would I've wished to be paired
Our romance lives through each breath we extol

What you glimpse in my eyes can be defined
by the same vision I fathom in yours;
A forever love, heavenly divined
Come and walk with me upon moonlit shores

In echoes our love shall ever resound
to depths far deeper than ocean or sea
Our hearts and souls, perpetually bound
Wherever you are is where I shall be

Tears of joy testify to love's glory
They verify years of our love story

Thanks for renewing our joined writings, Mike. Your sonnets are always a joy and an opportunity to imagine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/20/2017 5:55:00 PM
I saw this one at MIke's page and just wanted you to know that I thought you two did a marvelous job together.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thank you. Can't say no to Mike when he asks to write together. It's like being transported to hills of heather.
Date: 8/19/2017 2:31:00 PM
Hi Lin, just dropping by to say once more that it was a pleasure and an honour to write this collaboration with you. I look forward to starting the "Celtic Dreams" writes. I look forward to collaborating once more. I have to fave the piece. Thank you for sharing ink with me. Hugs....Mike. XX I love the finished piece.
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Date: 8/19/2017 2:35:00 PM
well thanks a lot, Mike. Whenever you're ready we can continue, but take care with your collar bone.
Date: 8/17/2017 2:05:00 PM
You two make a great writing team! I especially identify with this line: "Our hearts pulse as one though age takes a toll". This is a beautiful collaboration! : ) What a beautiful picture that goes perfectly with your collaboration.
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:34:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Connie. Mike is very adept at setting the stage for this kind of poetry.
Date: 8/17/2017 9:55:00 AM
I love the old world view of romance...splendid you two
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:33:00 PM
Thanks, Tim. So do I.
Date: 8/17/2017 8:30:00 AM
I really enjoyed this loving sonnet today. Nicely written Lin and Mike :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Heidi.
Date: 8/17/2017 7:30:00 AM
Beautiful and amazing, Lin and Mike :) two awesome poets working together bring nothing but tears of joy:)
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Date: 8/17/2017 8:44:00 AM
aww thanks, Jo. Mike offered his romantic lines and they drew me in.
Date: 8/17/2017 5:02:00 AM
I absolutely LOVED this pair of Sonnets! They were so expertly done, and the rhyming, oh so perfect, I loved reading it this morning! What a wonderfully penned pair of poems, Great Work you two!!
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Date: 8/17/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thank you very much for enjoying our sonnets, Russell.
Date: 8/17/2017 4:58:00 AM
- I knew this was beautiful, Lin & Mike ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 8:42:00 AM
I'm gladdened to know your thoughts on it, Anne-Lise, Thank you.
Date: 8/17/2017 3:31:00 AM
aww such love and devotion Mike and Lin:-) its a joy to read your collaboration today and I love the picture Lin:-):-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan. I was happy Mike asked to continue our joined writings. I found this picture and thought it was perfect to show a slightly older couple, obviously in love.
Date: 8/16/2017 10:59:00 PM
Two beautiful sonnets from two talented poets...great collab...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/17/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thank you for the nice compliments, WW.
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