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My Soul Cries Joyful Tears: Written With Mike

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My wondrous love, my soul cries joyful tears, when i do feel your heart beat against me. As i hold you close, gone are all my fears, and our glory i know shall ever be. Your siren eyes they do call to my heart, in the depths of my soul your song does sing. From the heart of your eyes i shall not part, all my love and care to you i shall bring. In the depths of my love beauty i see, you are the beauty, the light of my soul. In your embrace love so gently can be, ever in echoes your love is my goal. Ever i know throughout all of my years, my wondrous love, my soul cries joyful tears. ~ ~ ~ What fulfilling love through the years we've shared Our hearts pulse as one though age takes a toll With no other would I've wished to be paired Our romance lives through each breath we extol What you glimpse in my eyes can be defined by the same vision I fathom in yours; A forever love, heavenly divined Come and walk with me upon moonlit shores In echoes our love shall ever resound to depths far deeper than ocean or sea Our hearts and souls, perpetually bound Wherever you are is where I shall be Tears of joy testify to love's glory They verify years of our love story Thanks for renewing our joined writings, Mike. Your sonnets are always a joy and an opportunity to imagine.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2017 5:55:00 PM

I saw this one at MIke's page and just wanted you to know that I thought you two did a marvelous job together.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/20/2017 6:49:00 PM

Thank you. Can't say no to Mike when he asks to write together. It's like being transported to hills of heather.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/19/2017 2:31:00 PM

Hi Lin, just dropping by to say once more that it was a pleasure and an honour to write this collaboration with you. I look forward to starting the "Celtic Dreams" writes. I look forward to collaborating once more. I have to fave the piece. Thank you for sharing ink with me. Hugs....Mike. XX I love the finished piece.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2017 2:35:00 PM

well thanks a lot, Mike. Whenever you're ready we can continue, but take care with your collar bone.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/17/2017 2:05:00 PM

You two make a great writing team! I especially identify with this line: "Our hearts pulse as one though age takes a toll". This is a beautiful collaboration! : ) What a beautiful picture that goes perfectly with your collaboration.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Connie. Mike is very adept at setting the stage for this kind of poetry.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/17/2017 9:55:00 AM

I love the old world view of romance...splendid you two

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thanks, Tim. So do I.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/17/2017 8:30:00 AM

I really enjoyed this loving sonnet today. Nicely written Lin and Mike :)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 8:44:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Heidi.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/17/2017 7:30:00 AM

Beautiful and amazing, Lin and Mike :) two awesome poets working together bring nothing but tears of joy:)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 8:44:00 AM

aww thanks, Jo. Mike offered his romantic lines and they drew me in.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/17/2017 5:02:00 AM

I absolutely LOVED this pair of Sonnets! They were so expertly done, and the rhyming, oh so perfect, I loved reading it this morning! What a wonderfully penned pair of poems, Great Work you two!!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 8:43:00 AM

Thank you very much for enjoying our sonnets, Russell.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2017 4:58:00 AM

- I knew this was beautiful, Lin & Mike ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 8:42:00 AM

I'm gladdened to know your thoughts on it, Anne-Lise, Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2017 3:31:00 AM

aww such love and devotion Mike and Lin:-) its a joy to read your collaboration today and I love the picture Lin:-):-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 8:42:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan. I was happy Mike asked to continue our joined writings. I found this picture and thought it was perfect to show a slightly older couple, obviously in love.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/16/2017 10:59:00 PM

Two beautiful sonnets from two talented poets...great collab...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 8/17/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thank you for the nice compliments, WW.