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My Son's Hand

The first time I touched his hand, that feeling was hard to understand. This little baby looking up at me, through my tear full eyes all I could see. Was this beautiful baby, my little boy, my love, my spirit, my joy. As his little hand held my finger tight, he began to sleep all through the night. JSergi Contest :With These Hands Visual #2 Date written 12/11/13

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Date: 8/1/2014 2:59:00 PM
Awhhh though I am not yet a parent but your poem really describe and express how it feel to be.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 8/1/2014 4:30:00 PM
I am glad you enjoyed this work. Thanks for stopping by and for your kind words.
Date: 12/17/2013 5:52:00 PM
Such an incredible feeling to become a parent....nice work!
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/17/2013 7:31:00 PM
It changes your life but in a good way. Thanks for the post again Jennife!!
Date: 12/17/2013 6:27:00 AM
very touching and loving great job
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/17/2013 3:17:00 PM
Madelin thank you so much for your post and for stopping by.
Date: 12/13/2013 8:53:00 PM
I relived such times with my little babies through your prose, and the recall was both comforting and warm. Thanks, Joseph, for being my guide.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/13/2013 8:56:00 PM
Mark thank you for the kind words I am glad the poem rekindled such wonderful memories.
Date: 12/12/2013 5:03:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..A winner in my book....Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were uplifting..You must be a parent to understand this emotion...Sara
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/12/2013 3:56:00 PM
Yes Sara I am. Thank you for the post and for stopping by.
Date: 12/12/2013 4:55:00 AM
- A sweet and lovely written poem Joseph ! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/12/2013 3:57:00 PM
Thank You Anne Lise for your words and for the "Luck"

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