My Son's Accension To College Today

my son's last day
he's going
away
cork boats
in gutters
long
away
gone
today
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Mason Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 4:14 PM
Beautiful poignant write here, Thomas!! Where does the time go? ... smile ... excellent selection to be featured this week here at PoetrySoup!! Congratulations!!
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December 22, 2009 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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December 22, 2009 at 3:39 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Thomas. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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December 21, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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