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                                                      Your strong hand to hold .

My Sonnet - SHM

Every child's laughter, the rustle of the trees, 
Every intended deed that rights a wrong,
Every floating bubble, every gossamer breeze,
Every bird that sings its own sweet song,

The glow of a brightly colored balloon,
The wonder of a wild animal running free,
The excitement of a surprise coming soon,
The power of the waves crashing in the sea,

Every bright sunset that turns the sky black.
Every sunrise, the sky wrapped in purest gold,
Every message that says you are coming back,
Every moment of your strong hand to hold.

These WONDERS I CHERISH DEEPLY IN MY HEART.
Till we are together NEVER MORE TO BE APART.

every bright sunset    
the sky wrapped in purest gold
your strong hand to hold

Wonders I cherish deeply in my heart...never more to be apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Messina Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 7:36 AM
Oops! A lovely poem, SV I love the message here. Unfortunately there were too many syllables. Happy New Year, my friend.
Volumes Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Yup my sonnet lines were way out on the syllable count. Didn't expect a place at all Charlie. So thank you. If I ever need to write a sonnet again, I have now learned they are 10 syllables per line....
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November 17, 2023 at 8:20 PM
Your sonnet and other forms are all well written, SV. I think I'm correct in saying nice entry for the contest. Good luck, my friend. Bill
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November 17, 2023 at 11:04 PM
Its for Charlie's contest Bill, but I haven't entered it yet cause I don't understand all the instructions, and I have been getting into trouble lately for not following the instructions on the contests. So I will wait till Charlie answers my query, if he has time to. For now (more importantly) Thank you for your lovely comment. I really appreciate it. SV
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