Renee Kelly Poet Free verse

My Sister, My Best Friend

You were supposed to be my first best friend
We were to look out for one another
I tried to always be there when things got rough
And though we grew up in the same home
You took a path separate from mine
We spoke less and less over the years
I tried to extend a hand and do what was right
But I lost you my sister and my first best friend

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Renee Kelly March 7, 2011 at 10:38 AM Thank you, Carol! This one was the hardest to write. It always brings tears to my eyes.

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2011 at 10:31 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Renee. Love, Carol

Renee Kelly February 27, 2011 at 8:46 AM Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta - I'm attempting to spread my creative wings. Poetry isn't my forte.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 24, 2011 at 4:52 PM Sentimental and emotional write on my sister, my best friend, Renee

Renee Kelly February 24, 2011 at 7:09 AM Thank you, Carol!

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 5:39 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Renee. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol

Renee Kelly February 23, 2011 at 7:37 PM Thank you, Caryl :)

Caryl Muzzey February 23, 2011 at 4:58 PM A very moving write. I can relate to your words. Caryl