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My Silly Valentine

MY SILLY VALENTINE love two struck he timid she so demure chocolates proffered reluctant acceptance all about waistline worries “fat or thin i’ll love you as much” says he going down on one knobby knee “oh tee hee” says she stuffing greedily

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/17/2012 5:51:00 PM

got me laughing Daver.... reality strikes and those last couple lines make it for me. love Bob

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/11/2012 10:35:00 AM

Sweet man he is.... "fat or thin"it does not matter, love anyway!(I am I chocolate lover)Happy Valentines Day!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Daver Austin
Date: 2/11/2012 10:51:00 AM

YES! Hershey P.A. FOREVER! LOve, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2012 4:08:00 PM

hahaha. I love her little tee hee hee as she stuffed her face. Personally, when my husband tells me he will like me thin or not, it makes no difference to me. For me, it's MYSELF that I don't want to let down and I am always trying to control my urges for food!! a life long battle. Good topic for this chocolate time of year, my friend.

Daver Austin
Date: 2/11/2012 10:33:00 AM

They shall probably find me, wrappings of a huge Hershey bar at my feet and wonderful milk chocolate juice on my lips. No I'm not dead, just gone to some heavely sphere. Love, daver