My Silly Valentine

MY SILLY VALENTINE

love
two struck
he timid
she so demure
chocolates proffered
reluctant   acceptance
all about waistline worries
“fat or thin i’ll love you as much”
says he  going down on one knobby knee
“oh  tee  hee”  says she    stuffing greedily
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dufresne Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 5:51 PM
got me laughing Daver.... reality strikes and those last couple lines make it for me. love Bob
Andresen Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 10:35 AM
Sweet man he is.... "fat or thin"it does not matter, love anyway!(I am I chocolate lover)Happy Valentines Day!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Austin Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 10:51 AM
YES! Hershey P.A. FOREVER! LOve, daver
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 4:08 PM
hahaha. I love her little tee hee hee as she stuffed her face. Personally, when my husband tells me he will like me thin or not, it makes no difference to me. For me, it's MYSELF that I don't want to let down and I am always trying to control my urges for food!! a life long battle. Good topic for this chocolate time of year, my friend.
Austin Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 10:33 AM
They shall probably find me, wrappings of a huge Hershey bar at my feet and wonderful milk chocolate juice on my lips. No I'm not dead, just gone to some heavely sphere. Love, daver
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