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My Side Of The Street

Crystal cloudy lessons of pathos. A dawning awareness in the gloaming. Valiantly, a melancholy soul goes on. Toward an unpredictable future. A frosted flake without a growl. Left to grieve forevermore. The shadows now have walked away. Looking for the sun in a sky of grey. For the Eight words contest. Aug 15, 2017

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Date: 8/16/2017 3:31:00 PM
Melancholy baby, that should be my nicname for you, but for sure, the words of this challenge encourage just this type of writing!!
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Date: 8/15/2017 7:28:00 PM
a sad (yes, melancholy) poem but i think i detect a ray of hope at the end, robert (or at least i hope so). my favorite line is the "frosted flake without a growl." now THAT is poetry!
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Date: 8/15/2017 6:54:00 PM
I absolutely love this. Touches me. A fav.
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