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My Ship Sails

MY SHIP SAILS my ship sails at midnight, my love and I out for a joy ride, as waves rock our world, by the glow of a sappy moon. our sea salt lips tingle, the warm caribbean breezes engage our sensate shadows. pure bliss, in cups of cheer. burdens of work, far, below deck. my hair tangoes in such freedom, and i weakly smile at my love. his hair a dashing gray, his eyes - those familiar browns. i was crashed to the shore, thrown overboard, with such eyes as his. when they soften i fall in love all over again. again and again. Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Date: 4/28/2017 1:08:00 PM
I love reading about the passion that is shared on the sea. Your ending is superb! A fave for me Kim. ; ) 7
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie!
Date: 4/28/2017 10:20:00 AM
Nice romantic setting Kim - sounds like you are preparing for a lovely cruise on your boat with only the two of you as crew - Have fun
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 2:01:00 PM
Even with many, there are only two ;) Thanks, Maria!
Date: 4/27/2017 8:57:00 AM
I love everything sea, ship, boat and love :) And this is lovely.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Darren <3
Date: 4/27/2017 8:22:00 AM
So romantic Kim!loved it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 4/27/2017 8:01:00 AM
Sounds like a beautiful cruise to me. Really nice Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2017 8:06:00 AM
Soon to be so a great fantasy piece! Thanks, my friend!

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