My Shadow

My Shadow….

Lost in the path of this dreadful life,
thinking of years that I spent in strife;
walking and thinking, what is ahead?
Living with pain or dying instead.
Watching my shadow crawling below;
scared and dazed, with nothing to show.

My shadow was darkened by the gloomy night;
Walking behind me, frightened by light.
He didn't know his nature was light;
he taught that he was planted by night.
Awaiting until dawn with the breeze
to make the shadow taller than trees.
Little by little, the light of time
made it so shadow reaching his prime.
The shadow started to sing and dance
in the garden of the life romance.

He was the young one, handsome and bold.
Never thought there would be days of old.
Dancing with the drum of joy and youth,
only the time will teach us the truth.

The morning turned into the mid-day sun,
I was standing, but the shadow in run.
He was running, and I was the chase;
I couldn't keep up, and he lost the race.

He was blaming me, I got too old,
So much as my life, losing its gold.
The sun was setting; the shadow got dim.
Little by little got, pale and slim.
His height and his youth vanished so soon.
The sun left him and kept the moon.

What will happen if the shadow is gone?
Should I ever wish to see the dawn?

6/23/2016   Haloo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kroll Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 12:26 PM
I love your imagery. There is so much to think about here. It's one I could reread often and still find something new. So well done, Pashang. Thank you for sharing your inner thoughts. Hugs, kathy
Salehi Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Thanks Kathy, I'm glad that you like my work.
Ra Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 9:55 AM
So deep. Love that i can associate myself to so many words in this beautiful poem
Salehi Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Thank you Sofia
Makama Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 11:24 AM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
Salehi Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Thank you my friend....
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:10 AM
I tell my kids, climb those hills and run while you can because as age creeps up you won't feel it approach until it arrives. I can relate so well to your lovely poem Pashang. 7 ; )
Salehi Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Thanks Connie..... it will get easier soon .....
Hagy Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Such a deep write, and so reflective of how we feel growing older...great write!
Salehi Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Thanks Chris...
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 3:02 AM
I got a huge lump in my throat reading your lines Pashang - lets hope our shadows follow us for many yeas to come:-) hugs Jan xx7
Salehi Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 2:49 AM
See I told you I have a shadow poem as well.....Thanks for stopping by....
Misra Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 9:09 PM
My 7
Salehi Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 12:37 AM
Thanks again...
Misra Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 9:06 PM
A very beautiful poem, full of meaning. I loved the various stages you associated with the shadow. Wonderful poem. A 7. and a fave. ~karam~
Salehi Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 12:37 AM
Thank you Sir... You're truly your name" Karam"
Heemstra Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 8:17 PM
I live where there's plenty of hills, and some are steeper than others! Even my shadow won't go down those hills with me! Great write, Pashang!
Salehi Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Thanks Robert..... the problems are those hills and good air...Smog is the key....Pashang
Canerdy Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 12:55 PM
A 7 for this very descriptive poem I can relate to! Janice
Salehi Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Thanks Janice....
Williams Gault Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Such detailed images, sad when the body can't do what the mind wants it do. Great expression.
Salehi Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 12:27 AM
Thank you Dineen...
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Much creativity in this poem about life and growing old. WELL done. I really like it.
Salehi Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 12:27 AM
My dear Gazalier.... your always so kind to me...
Rashid Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 1:46 PM
your words need no praise freind your inception of life is jubiliant your way of looking around is awesome nice write
Salehi Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Thank you Kamran... You're so kind....
Turner Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Like you, my days of dancing shadows have passed. Very sad write Pashang but when you return your shadow will come with you. Great write and peace my friend.
Salehi Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 8:41 PM
DT, what is happening to us? I hate it....
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