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My Sentiment On Love

Lying in my bed with you on my mind you are miles away but the memories brings you so close I sometimes feel your body next to mine If you could touch me you would feel my heart racing with thoughts of you they make the lonely nights more tolerable your voice although only over the phone still weaken my knees I just want you to know with this pen and paper that, “I will love you forever”…
3rd Place SENTIMENTAL LOVE LETTERS Sponsored by: AUDREY CAREY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/19/2010 6:18:00 AM
I just read a lady by the name of Joy Wellington, you both have similar perspective on love ... the pledge of personal commitment.
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:00:00 AM
What beautiful thought Wilma. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Wilma in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 9:10:00 AM
and I knew this was a winner! Sure am happy you were able to enter this in the contest! & that you got that sentimental pen on time! Super congrats on your win, missy :) hugs nikko :)
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:52:00 AM
Congrats Wilma dear friend on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday as u also celebrate many wonderful festive things for your homeland..luv.. this happy Sunday...
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:39:00 AM
I'm so glad you entered this one, Wilma. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:14:00 AM
A well deserved win from a lady of love... perfectly written and a winner from day one..Much Love Michael
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:38:00 PM
Wilma, it seems we do have a few things in common. Our love is eternal and our true love is not very close to us. Great write and congrats on your win in Audrey's contest. Love, lots, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/6/2010 5:56:00 PM
So,so beautiful Wilma.Sweet gentle,romantic and so touching.Last line made me go weak at the knees with emotion and love for my own sweet darling.He's not away from me, just asleep.But feelings of love are so wonderful to share,thank you. Love June
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:46:00 PM
Dear Wilma, Thank you for supporting my contest with this heartfelt write..only the heart knows the depth of the love it feels..it only cares for the seemily little things that hold joy everlasting! ...his voice, his words...I wish you had expanded, but still it was good! Enjoyed it. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations Wilma on your much derserved win for a third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:04:00 PM
congratulations on this well deserved win, Wilma
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Date: 11/6/2010 12:01:00 PM
Your love for him shines in your words Wilma, beautifully written >> James :)
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Date: 11/6/2010 10:03:00 AM
Hi there missy :)! Well yours definitely outshone mine-- I hope this made it to the contest? Audrey's contest sure closed fast! happy you got in the mood to write-- you sure brought sentimental here & don't forget sweet-- btw your comment in my poem was way too funny haha--enjoy your day! hugs to you -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/6/2010 4:31:00 AM
A sweet sentiment of love and loving, Wilma. I hope he's home soon for you. :-)
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Date: 11/5/2010 2:55:00 PM
Made me smile and hope this man knows what he is missing every moment not with you....just my thoughts hope you don't mind..Love Michael
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:31:00 AM
It has to be true love if your knees weaken when you just hear his voice on the phone, Wilma. Sometimes the anticipation of the "touch" is more exciting than the event itself. A beautiful poem that would make a great entry for Audrey's contest if you haven't already entered one. Love, Carolyn
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