My Secret Valentine

My  best friend is my secret valentine 
All through high school he was my only crush
It would be dream if I could make him mine 
Being in his presence gives such a rush
Telling how I feel must be genuine
But I can't, I need a glass of red wine



1-24-17
Contest: A Rhyme In 60
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 8:13 AM
A cute write Alexis. You made me smile.
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 7:06 PM
Nice seeing this one again on the winners' list. Congrats, Alexis.
Burch Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations Alexis!!! Well done!!! Big Hugggs!! Deb
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January 25, 2017 at 6:15 AM
Red wine always works to gulp down unexpressed feelings. Short, simple and cute poem.
Muzzey Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 7:44 PM
Really like the ending Alexis, to the point. Red wine does it all the time~ Caryl
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 7:04 PM
so cute how you ended this one. I loved the read, Alexis.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 6:52 PM
What a great entry for the contest Alexis! I loved your ending! : ) 7
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January 24, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Cool poem, Alexis. Hard to do this contest, but you turned up aces. Excellent theme too. A very vibrant poem, dear. It exudes love and honesty. A deserving 7. Love and joy to you.
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January 24, 2017 at 2:41 PM
:) Sweet....very sweet, my dear. Loved this little piece. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your lovely post on my blog, Alexis. It is much appreciated.
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 12:52 PM
love the theme here Alexis I'd have that glass of wine for dutch courage and tell him!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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January 24, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Wow Alexis, I was telling Daniel earlier how hard it was to write for this contest and now you post one and make it look even easier. This is stellar my friend, such a wonderful and delightful poem for the contest. Winner, winner chicken dinner. :)
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January 24, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Hi Chris, Thank you so much for such a great comment. But I look forward to yours. Because I know it will be amazing. I appreciate you being the first to comment:-)Alexis
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