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My Secret Valentine

My best friend is my secret valentine All through high school he was my only crush It would be dream if I could make him mine Being in his presence gives such a rush Telling how I feel must be genuine But I can't, I need a glass of red wine 1-24-17 Contest: A Rhyme In 60 Sponsor: Laura Loo

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James Inman

Date: 2/3/2017 8:13:00 AM

A cute write Alexis. You made me smile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2017 7:06:00 PM

Nice seeing this one again on the winners' list. Congrats, Alexis.

Deborah Burch

Date: 2/1/2017 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations Alexis!!! Well done!!! Big Hugggs!! Deb

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/25/2017 6:15:00 AM

Red wine always works to gulp down unexpressed feelings. Short, simple and cute poem.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/24/2017 7:44:00 PM

Really like the ending Alexis, to the point. Red wine does it all the time~ Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2017 7:04:00 PM

so cute how you ended this one. I loved the read, Alexis.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/24/2017 6:52:00 PM

What a great entry for the contest Alexis! I loved your ending! : ) 7

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/24/2017 6:18:00 PM

Cool poem, Alexis. Hard to do this contest, but you turned up aces. Excellent theme too. A very vibrant poem, dear. It exudes love and honesty. A deserving 7. Love and joy to you.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/24/2017 2:41:00 PM

:) Sweet....very sweet, my dear. Loved this little piece. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your lovely post on my blog, Alexis. It is much appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/24/2017 12:52:00 PM

love the theme here Alexis I'd have that glass of wine for dutch courage and tell him!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7

Chris Green

Date: 1/24/2017 12:03:00 PM

Wow Alexis, I was telling Daniel earlier how hard it was to write for this contest and now you post one and make it look even easier. This is stellar my friend, such a wonderful and delightful poem for the contest. Winner, winner chicken dinner. :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/24/2017 12:21:00 PM

Hi Chris, Thank you so much for such a great comment. But I look forward to yours. Because I know it will be amazing. I appreciate you being the first to comment:-)Alexis