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Alouette Poetry Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich Syllable count, 5-5-7-5-5-7, rhyme: a-a-b-c-c-b
Come and follow me to my home and see… …come walk each step I've walked. Let me introduce myself, a recluse. Each closed door your eyes unlocked. I will let you in, lovingly attend… …my soft and secret places. Shut the whole world out. Shine a light about all dark and hidden spaces.

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Date: 12/3/2024 7:48:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from start 'til the end. God bless you.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/3/2024 8:25:00 AM
Ty! Xo
Date: 12/3/2024 6:27:00 AM
I love this poem, so beguiling, congratulations
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/3/2024 8:25:00 AM
Ty for saying so! Xo
Date: 12/3/2024 3:00:00 AM
"…my soft and secret places" - Indeed, the true shrine. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/3/2024 8:25:00 AM
Ty! Xo
Date: 12/2/2024 11:40:00 PM
This is so intriguing, Crystol. Thanks so much for talking the Alouette challenge and congrats.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/3/2024 8:24:00 AM
What a lovely contest! I really enjoyed writing and reading this form! Thanks! Xo
Date: 12/2/2024 8:51:00 PM
beautiful place... congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/3/2024 8:24:00 AM
Tyxo
Date: 11/11/2024 3:27:00 PM
Tempting poetic invitation to the secret, inner workings of another human being. Not everyone gets an invite, only those who can be trusted not to betray an honest heart. Good stuff Crys
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/11/2024 4:08:00 PM
Yess That is a wonderful gift to give someone you love. Thanks for writing! Xo

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