Crystol Woods Poet Rhyme

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Alouette Poetry Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich Syllable count, 5-5-7-5-5-7, rhyme: a-a-b-c-c-b

My Secret Places

Come and follow me
to my home and see…
…come walk each step I've walked.
Let me introduce
myself, a recluse.
Each closed door your eyes unlocked.

I will let you in,
lovingly attend…
…my soft and secret places.
Shut the whole world out.
Shine a light about
all dark and hidden spaces.

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Beata Agustin December 3, 2024 at 7:48 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from start 'til the end. God bless you. Crystol Woods December 3, 2024 at 8:25 AM Ty! Xo

Terry Miller December 3, 2024 at 6:27 AM I love this poem, so beguiling, congratulations Crystol Woods December 3, 2024 at 8:25 AM Ty for saying so! Xo

Christuraj Alex December 3, 2024 at 3:00 AM "…my soft and secret places" - Indeed, the true shrine. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Crystol Woods December 3, 2024 at 8:25 AM Ty! Xo

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2024 at 11:40 PM This is so intriguing, Crystol. Thanks so much for talking the Alouette challenge and congrats. Crystol Woods December 3, 2024 at 8:24 AM What a lovely contest! I really enjoyed writing and reading this form! Thanks! Xo

thriveni c mysore December 2, 2024 at 8:51 PM beautiful place... congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers. Crystol Woods December 3, 2024 at 8:24 AM Tyxo