My Secret

Soon as I realized I had married this dude for life
I tried some tricks and formulae to be a happy wife

Every man has a weakness and thankfully his was food
With delectable bites on his tongue, he could be subdued

Understood that the key to his love lay in the pit of his stomach
Started trying recipes from his mom’s cookbook, hoping for some luck

A naive cook that I was, many a times, I burnt my  hands
But knew with a little effort, at a vantage point I’ll stand

Now, as the aroma of his family’s food in my kitchen lingers
I have him wrapped around my skinny little fingers

As the morsels of his favorite food slowly traipse his esophagus
He looks at me dazed, as if he’s lost all his consciousness

The pulverized bits and sips in the intestine sing him a sweet lullaby
And he says yes to about anything I wish under the blue sky

But these poems of mine I should keep in check
If he finds out, he’ll surely wring my slender neck

Written on 09/10/2016
Contest:'A body of work' by Viv Wigley
Body part names used:
Stomach
Fingers
Esophagus
Neck
Hand
Tongue
intestine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ajmal Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 10:28 AM
Haha very beautiful written poem, may God keep your marriage a happy one, and both of you remain happy for the rest of your life, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Inman Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Very clever Sara, left me smiling.
Martin Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 3:00 PM
Humourous take on the original contest. Congratulations on your second win Sara! :-)
Gupta Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 5:54 AM
Ha ha , A nice read indeed ... all the best ...
Turner Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Made me chuckle! A very fun read, Sara.
Hoffman Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Made me chuckle Sara, the way to a mans heart is through his stomach so they say!:)
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