My Secret

I hide in my heart,
A secret as syllabic
As a Shakespearean sonnet;
Yes, if revealed, it would have you
Melting with its sweetness,
Arousing you with its pulsating passions
And causing you to bite your lips for more of it!

I hide in my heart,
A secret as grandiose
As the reason why the Taj Mahal exists,
Yes, visiting it,
You would be overwhelmed by its essence
Wanting to live it too 
Wanting to have, for yourself,
A unique monument erected!

I hide in my heart,
A secret as deep as the depth of the night
When illumined it is,
Only by a sparkling moon
A moon sparkling so bright merely
Because it has closed its eyes
Unable to hold its blushes
As I reveal to it,
My hidden secret, in the form
Of lines and lines of poetic verses!

I hide in my heart,
A secret as moving as an epic love song
A love song which, when played,
Is powerful and rhythmic enough
As to have you cry over it
As it would bring out in you
Those lost emotions which make of you
A human being, kind, humble and compassionate!

I hide in my heart,
A secret,
One so mystical,
That its meaning is found in religion
One so fateful,
That its meaning has been set by the Gods
One so wonderful,
That it shall be captured someday,
In a book titled
The Story of My Life!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/10/2019 4:33:00 PM
Very well written. Congrats on being honored, and got first Placement.
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Date: 1/5/2019 1:50:00 PM
Hello Anoucheka,I am pleased that you have gotten First Placement. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/30/2018 3:22:00 PM
A very lovely First Placement Anoucheka! Congratulations on your wonderful well deserved win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/30/2018 10:42:00 AM
WoW! Anoucheka, You've penned a well written and clever write. The repeated use of "I hide in my heart, A sercret " made a good poem even better. I enjoyed the read. I see why you hold the top stop. Congratulations:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/30/2018 2:05:00 AM
Congratulations Anoucheka..such a mysterious write , that opens in simple and sweet words
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Date: 12/29/2018 5:25:00 PM
This and others of your poems which it has prompted me to read for the first time have a very special depth and beauty. I was compelled to read on here to find out the secret! Congratulations on your win in the contest, Anoucheka
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/30/2018 12:26:00 AM
Thank you Wendy :)
Date: 12/29/2018 4:11:00 PM
This is just beautiful..congrats on your first place win.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/30/2018 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 12/29/2018 1:47:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem this is, truly a beauty, I absolutely love the way you wrote it, everything about it was perfect, I am amazed that despite being such a good poem, it didn't receive any comments, anyways many congratulations on your 1st position in my contest, it was a masterpiece and one of the best poems I have ever read on poetrysoup, good luck and have a really nice day
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/30/2018 12:25:00 AM
Dear Faraz...…….No words can express my joy at this honor...….many thanks :) !!! :)
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