My Savior Alone I Thank

Crossing bridges, of forever and ever with your love.
Griping the railings of your passion. its 
freely my new fashion.Taking me to a dimension,
beyond 3-d, with 4-d kisses ,this is where  
bliss is.Not in some mistress.

A love wrapped tight by hershey kisses.
A love captured by kodak pictures.throwing
away a past so gloomy and dim.Making slim the 
memories so grim.

To the brim of your love i grasped.
reaching from a murky water, drowning in a glass.
like blocking a donkeys behind,you saved my ass. 
for this you will be my last. beyond the past of daunting trash.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Britt Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 9:12 PM
You ARE a poet
Burch Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 2:03 AM
Amazing Elliott...very raw and captivating...well done...big hugss,deb
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 2:07 AM
thank you much...God bless.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 10:10 PM
so enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight Elliott.. and welcomed to PS.. hope u enjoy the many features the siter offers as u continue to share poetry and words with luv..
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 10:20 PM
Thank you.These words taken well, from a sweetheart.I am glad you enjoyed.
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