My Savior
A crisp new smell,
so refreshing is the taste,
feels like new,
with every breath I take.
The chill that follows,
a welcomed reprieve,
bringing a sense of awareness,
everything surrounds me.
Mesmerizing sound,
as each drops falls,
which clams my mind,
I feel at peace inside.
The rain is my Savior,
it always puts me at ease
the miracle of nature,
this is how it effects me.
M.Mahauariki © 2012
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