My Rhyme the Best

Hi! I want to chant why my rhyme is the best;
I have a scant five minutes—this my time really limits;
If I fail it won't be my demise—Errare humanum est;
My rhyme makes folks gawk, sometimes so much they
Cannot even talk—My rhymes surprise and blow you away!

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10th April 2014
Contest: Rhyme Battle: Round Five
Sponsor: Juli-Michelle
Placing: 5th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Shiells Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Hi Ivo, Congrats this is wonderful!! You Rhyme fine:-) my friend. Thank you for visiting too I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing. Love and Peace, Deborah
Davis Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Ivo Such a cute and creative write. A fun one to read. Thank you for the awesome comment on my It Could Happen To You poem.
Allison Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 3:15 PM
Great rhyme Ivo well done on your win hugs Jan xx
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April 20, 2014 at 1:04 AM
Hi, Ivo.... I remember how this inspired me to join the battle. Love the, win....Linda
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 11:32 AM
A FUnny yet very witty rhyme:) CONGRATUKATIONS on the win:),olive eloisa:)
Devonshire Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Dear Ivo, Great rhyme! Especially loved the last line. Congratulations on your win. Love and blessings for a happy Easter weekend, Carolyn
A. Sharma Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 1:47 AM
Yes Ivo and finally u didnt fail and blew us all away wid this one,,, great poem and a great win ! Congrats !
Walker  Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 7:48 PM
Nice win Ivo... Congratulations... Verlena
Smith Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 6:18 PM
I am gawking at your wonderful rhyme Ivo...Congrats on the win...Tim
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April 15, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Hi Ivo, i like that you took on this contest. I myself entered an old poem. I'm crossing my fingers, for you and for me.... You are an awesome rhymer. I try hard with my rhymes. XOX~ Linda
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Hi Ivo, I like the way you set out your rhymes. gl in the contest :) // paul
Callus Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 3:49 PM
Hope I am in time to be the first to congratulate you on your win. Nice to see you on the winning list :) // paul
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