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My rhyme the best

Hi! I want to chant why my rhyme is the best; I have a scant five minutes—this my time really limits; If I fail it won't be my demise—Errare humanum est; My rhyme makes folks gawk, sometimes so much they Cannot even talk—My rhymes surprise and blow you away! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 10th April 2014 Contest: Rhyme Battle: Round Five Sponsor: Juli-Michelle Placing: 5th

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Date: 5/13/2014 6:09:00 PM
Hi Ivo, Congrats this is wonderful!! You Rhyme fine:-) my friend. Thank you for visiting too I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/1/2014 9:11:00 PM
Ivo Such a cute and creative write. A fun one to read. Thank you for the awesome comment on my It Could Happen To You poem.
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Date: 4/22/2014 3:15:00 PM
Great rhyme Ivo well done on your win hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/20/2014 1:04:00 AM
Hi, Ivo.... I remember how this inspired me to join the battle. Love the, win....Linda
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Date: 4/19/2014 11:32:00 AM
A FUnny yet very witty rhyme:) CONGRATUKATIONS on the win:),olive eloisa:)
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Date: 4/19/2014 10:59:00 AM
Dear Ivo, Great rhyme! Especially loved the last line. Congratulations on your win. Love and blessings for a happy Easter weekend, Carolyn
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Date: 4/19/2014 1:47:00 AM
Yes Ivo and finally u didnt fail and blew us all away wid this one,,, great poem and a great win ! Congrats !
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Date: 4/18/2014 7:48:00 PM
Nice win Ivo... Congratulations... Verlena
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Date: 4/18/2014 6:18:00 PM
I am gawking at your wonderful rhyme Ivo...Congrats on the win...Tim
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Date: 4/15/2014 11:00:00 PM
Hi Ivo, i like that you took on this contest. I myself entered an old poem. I'm crossing my fingers, for you and for me.... You are an awesome rhymer. I try hard with my rhymes. XOX~ Linda
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Date: 4/14/2014 9:14:00 AM
Hi Ivo, I like the way you set out your rhymes. gl in the contest :) // paul
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Date: 4/18/2014 3:49:00 PM
Hope I am in time to be the first to congratulate you on your win. Nice to see you on the winning list :) // paul