My Response To Rumi

So many times I carried a monster inside me;
it kept on eating my joy away,
like an ember at the cigarette tip.
I was embarrassed to talk about my dark secrets,
afraid to sound like a shattering vase inside me.
"Everyone is broken, my child," a sage once told me.
"It's just that they don't talk about their brokenness"....
 He told me that if I accepted I was broken and focused
on my healing, I would become as beautiful as a vase,
whose pieces were joined using liquid gold.



Date: 28/11/2016



 "If you desire healing,

  let yourself fall ill

 let yourself fall ill."

  -  Jalaluddin Rumi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Wonderfully done Teddy, congratulations...
Kimathi Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 7:14 AM
Thank you so much, Charlie!!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Teddy, congratulations on your well-deserved podium win for your intensely profound poem. Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 7:12 AM
Oh, thank you so much Sandra, for your kind applause, and continuous morale support!!! *^_^*
Vinson Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 2:47 PM
So good, Teddy, and so appropriate. I wonder how many sages still smoke? I'm sure some do.
Kimathi Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 7:09 AM
Definitely, Doug!!! Everyone has to experience the dark, to understand the essence of the light.... Thank you so much, for your applause!!! ;-)
Capitano Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Congrats Teddy on a fine win.
Kimathi Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Thanks so much, Phil!! ;-)
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 1:14 PM
I love the liquid gold. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win.
Kimathi Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 7:05 AM
I love it too, Dane!! Thank you for your kind applause!!! *^_^*
Martin Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Agree with all the others - love the last two lines. Even mended things can have beauty. Congrats! :-)
Kimathi Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Greetings Mark. Thank you so much for your warm applause!! ;-)
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 8:18 AM
A 7+ for your profoundly meaningful WINNING poem--those last two lines especially, Teddy! Janice
Kimathi Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 8:01 AM
I really appreciate your kind words, Janice!!! *^_^* Thank you so much for passing by to applaud my work!!! *^_^*
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Lovely, Teddy! So true! Congrats!
Kimathi Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 7:58 AM
Hi Kim. Thank you so much, for applauding my work!!! *^_^*
White Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 2:03 AM
Teddy, this is so true, so few lines, such good words. Congratulations!
Kimathi Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Hi Darren. Thank you for your warm applause!!! ;-)
Neumann Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 1:38 AM
This poem is a vase of hope and truth. Congratulations on your win, Kai
Kimathi Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Yes it is, Kai!!! ;-) Thank you so much for your kind applause!! :-)
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