My Rescued Heart

The sun has shined brighter ever since that day
Destiny made our paths cross
I was stunned to find out I could feel this way
My cynicism about love was lost

The shadows wherein my heart did lay
Due to failed love I so often saw
Melted in the brightness you sent my way
Proving its darkness a terrible flaw

Just because others have loved and failed
Didn’t mean it would happen to me
I knew the moment I saw you love would prevail
For the rest of my eternity

From a cynical world that was lonely and dark
Your aura, so bright, has rescued my heart


by Joe Flach
Written for Francine Robert's "Sonnet, sonnet, everywhere" contest.
Written and posted on June 8, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 2:20 PM
as always when you write of you gal GREAT...congrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sonnet" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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June 16, 2011 at 7:57 PM
A love poem to be proud of..congrats on your big win. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 6:45 PM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win with this awesome Sonnet luv..
Roberts Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 6:43 PM
such a beautiful sonnet Joe, congratson your second plce win in my contest and thanks for the support
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June 9, 2011 at 10:19 AM
oh joe, you simply enchant me with this stagerring piece... winning wishes and congrats on your award in my handmade contest! :) huggs, nette
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June 8, 2011 at 9:25 PM
Awesome! And so it should be! Wonderful write! You are blessed! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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