My Reflection

My reflection jumped out of the mirror and she said to me

	“I’m going to take over for a while. Put some life behind your smile you’ve been broken hearted for some time. Crying is not a crime. So let the tears flow. So you can let the past go. Trade places with me. I will show you how much happier you can be.”

So I traded places with my reflection. Hoping life turns in a better direction.
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June 9, 2013 at 12:01 AM
Prisita, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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June 13, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Thank you!
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June 5, 2013 at 11:10 AM
Self reflection is the water to our roots. Let it pour so it can let us grow. Beautifully written, Prisita!
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June 5, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Thank you!
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May 25, 2013 at 11:57 AM
a deep direction to grab, Prisita, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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May 21, 2013 at 7:55 AM
Clever analogy with the word 'reflection' and 'mirror'. Well penned. Welcome to P/Soup
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May 21, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Thank you!
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