My Red Flyer Sled

We lived in Charleston, West Virginia high up on a hill;
I wanted a Christmas present on which I’d catch some thrills.
Wooden slats anchored to curved blades of crimson red;
My fingers were crossed - Santa would bring a Red Flyer sled.

A rope in the handle bars to pull it up the mountain side,
I’ll wax down each metal blade to help make sure that it glides.
Snow we have a plenty up on the mountain top;
Laying on my tummy, dragging feet to make it stop.

You push on the handle piece in an attempt to make it steer,
But gravity is in control of that it is quickly clear.
You sled all day and then thaw out by the burning fire,
Thanking Santa and his elves for the new Red Flyer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 4:53 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on this third place win in the contest of Linda, Joe
Duffin Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:21 AM
Hi . Congratulations on your result in the contest with this great piece. A thoroughly deserved success. Eamon
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 3:26 AM
aggrree!! applause to you on your win :) nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Great toy this was. I loved my sled, though I don't think we ever had red flyer sleds. Those days sure have changed. I'd never want a gift like this today. haha. Congratulations on your win, joe!
Pettit Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:47 PM
I had a sled of my own, but it was called a "speedaway". You have written everything here quite well with fine descriptiveness and rhyming. No wonder it was chosen a winner in the contest. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:26 PM
I used to love snow sleding when I was a child, we had a big hill at the end of my street, congratulations on your win in the Linda's contest~~
Sweetheart Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:04 PM
Congrats Joe on your success in my Toyland contest... my winners list just posted tonight luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Congrats Joe on your 3rd place win.. see my blog posting all the winners as the system is not yet updated to reflect the 2011 contest winners for any contest luv..
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