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My Real Valentine

Once had a crush on a real Valentine Janice Valentine was a crush of mine Back in Grade Two But she never knew Much too shy to tell her how I pined © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/10/2015 11:55:00 PM

Another cute one. ^_^ My first crush gave me a rose and his address, and serenaded me - he sang horribly off tune, but the gesture was really sweet! I still know the guy after all this time...but we never talk now.. : ) It's funny how people come and go from our lives. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/11/2015 8:36:00 AM

Would love to meet Janice just one time! That's if she's still around! LOL We never forget our first love and I'll never forget this love we have, sweet Laura! Huggs and kisses, Jack xxx

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/8/2015 12:12:00 AM

Once had a crush on a girl called Theresa Green. It didn't last- I felt like I was lusting after a statement. Good work, Jack. Regards, Viv

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/8/2015 6:52:00 AM

LOL! Thanks for your visit, my friend!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 6/7/2015 11:16:00 PM

Well, it's not like you were at the age to tell her. Good poem -JT

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/8/2015 6:51:00 AM

Can't imagine what she would look like today or even if she is still alive! Thanks for dropping by again JT

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/7/2015 9:26:00 AM

I had a crush on Michael D'Angelo... No not the Sistine Chapel D'Angelo... Chased him about... The 1st grade playground I'd scout... Maybe I should have checked the school ceiling, no doubt!

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/8/2015 6:49:00 AM

WOW! I really thought you were younger than me! LOL xxxxxx

Cupids Arrow

Date: 6/7/2015 9:07:00 AM

Im sure Janice loved you too..Oh you didnt tell her..Shame on you ,lol : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/7/2015 9:12:00 AM

In grade two, not sure she knew what love was! Guess I could've asked here to marry me to see what what she said! LOL Huggsies, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/7/2015 7:40:00 AM

Bet she liked you too Jackeroo

Tim Smith
Date: 6/7/2015 7:50:00 AM

Speaking of skipping...my 15 year old daughter tried to embarrass me yesterday in front of the baseball team by making me skip with her....I just smiled and enjoyed it : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/7/2015 7:42:00 AM

Not sure... made some sexual advances but she just kept skipping!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2015 6:55:00 AM

aww cute so Jack:-) You should have written her a poem that would have worked wonders! :-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/7/2015 6:59:00 AM

Didn't know all these years later, I'd be writing a poem about her!!! Hugs, Jack xxx

Deb Wilson

Date: 6/7/2015 6:54:00 AM

So cute a story and common for lots of kids too ! Hugs, Deb

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/7/2015 6:58:00 AM

My VERY first of MANY!!! LOL I include you and all my ladies of the Soup!!! Huggsies, Jack xxx