My Real Valentine

Once had a crush on a real Valentine Janice Valentine was a crush of mine Back in Grade Two But she never knew Much too shy to tell her how I pined © Jack Ellison 2015
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Breidenthal Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Another cute one. ^_^ My first crush gave me a rose and his address, and serenaded me - he sang horribly off tune, but the gesture was really sweet! I still know the guy after all this time...but we never talk now.. : ) It's funny how people come and go from our lives. Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Would love to meet Janice just one time! That's if she's still around! LOL We never forget our first love and I'll never forget this love we have, sweet Laura! Huggs and kisses, Jack xxx
Wigley Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 12:12 AM
Once had a crush on a girl called Theresa Green. It didn't last- I felt like I was lusting after a statement. Good work, Jack. Regards, Viv
Ellison Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:52 AM
LOL! Thanks for your visit, my friend!
J.T. Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Well, it's not like you were at the age to tell her. Good poem -JT
Ellison Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:51 AM
Can't imagine what she would look like today or even if she is still alive! Thanks for dropping by again JT
Eastman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 9:26 AM
I had a crush on Michael D'Angelo... No not the Sistine Chapel D'Angelo... Chased him about... The 1st grade playground I'd scout... Maybe I should have checked the school ceiling, no doubt!
Ellison Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:49 AM
WOW! I really thought you were younger than me! LOL xxxxxx
Arrow Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Im sure Janice loved you too..Oh you didnt tell her..Shame on you ,lol : )
Ellison Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 9:12 AM
In grade two, not sure she knew what love was! Guess I could've asked here to marry me to see what what she said! LOL Huggsies, Jack xxx
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Bet she liked you too Jackeroo
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Speaking of skipping...my 15 year old daughter tried to embarrass me yesterday in front of the baseball team by making me skip with her....I just smiled and enjoyed it : )
Ellison Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Not sure... made some sexual advances but she just kept skipping!
Allison Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 6:55 AM
aww cute so Jack:-) You should have written her a poem that would have worked wonders! :-) Hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 6:59 AM
Didn't know all these years later, I'd be writing a poem about her!!! Hugs, Jack xxx
Wilson Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 6:54 AM
So cute a story and common for lots of kids too ! Hugs, Deb
Ellison Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 6:58 AM
My VERY first of MANY!!! LOL I include you and all my ladies of the Soup!!! Huggsies, Jack xxx
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