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My Rainy Muse

My rainy muse clouds my mind's vision. Colorblind to this deep blue sea of tear-filled ambiguity. These dim thoughts of mine want to drown me in it. Though, I can't even swim in here. Weights keep me down to the bottom. Please...I cannot... ...breathe now... Written On: July 2nd, 2017 Form Chosen: Rictameter Word Chosen: "Rainy" Contest: Form R Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 12/1/2017 3:59:00 PM
Alyssa, the depth of your emotion is deep and beautifully expressed. I was feeling your words more so than reading them. Inspired poetry.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 7/5/2017 2:06:00 PM
This is great :) the shape as well! Best of luck in the contest!!
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Date: 7/5/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeremy! :)
Date: 7/3/2017 4:52:00 PM
Gripping and emotional--especially line 4. I really like this, Alyssa! Janice
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Date: 7/3/2017 6:31:00 PM
Thanks, Janice! :)
Date: 7/2/2017 11:44:00 AM
You have done a wonderful job with this form. Good luck in the contest. Well written.
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Date: 7/2/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thank you, Janis! :)

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