My Rainbow

At the end of my rainbow,
I see a vacant space
That makes me realise 
The colours were illusion
And dreams were in vain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Suresh Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 11:04 AM
It is amazing to see how just a few lines can convey pure deep emotions. Amazing!
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 10:57 AM
I love the imagery... LINDA
Jacob Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Thank you
Nance Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:08 AM
This has a sad feel to it, a defeated one, it has done what it has meant to do, the wording is melancholic and it is a very well done brevity.
Jacob Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:36 AM
Thanks
Ebbs Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Your rainbow, your dreams of something more are not invain, they come from a passion within that make you special. Don't stop dreaming my friend, thank you for sharing :)
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