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My Puzzle Project

The pieces fit together, one by one—
through trial and error- curves fit into curves.
Sometimes, a piece is placed that jars the rest, 
so time is spent redoing what was done
to bring it to its former tidy state.

Though, out in view to work on each new day,
so many times the challenge seems too great, 
and so, it's often pushed away from sight. 
Still other times, each piece falls into place 
renewing eager interest in the game.

And slow but sure, the shapes are interlocked, 
revealing, bit by bit, the total scene. 
And all that’s hoped before the colors fade- 
the vision of my total life, complete;
the portrait of my finished dream- well done.


May 8, 2016

Contest: A Simple Pleasure
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Theme Chosen: Crossword Puzzle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 2:21 PM
A terrific analogy Sandra...congrats
George   Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Very provocative poem, Sandra. Many congrats on your win. Eaine
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 8:43 PM
this is lovely, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Joining the pieces of your life....I stopped and pondered about mine, wondering who'll fit in my last piece...will I manage it with my last breath!! ~ I enjoyed your buildup, Sandra...you used the same technique as in 'kaleidoscope'. Regards // paul
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Thank you very much, Paul...yes, life is our puzzle project! I appreciate your positive and supportive comments so much! Sandra
Rv Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Your ideas are amazinG!! This is an amazing poem, dear Sandra!! Good luck in the contest!! :) :)
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, Sneha, for stopping by with your uplifting comment! I really appreciate your nice visits. Hugs, Sandra
Heemstra Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Life's a puzzle! A great read for this Sunday morning! Thank you for the post and good luck in the contest!
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Hi, Robert, so nice of you to stop by to read my poem. I appreciate your positive and supportive comment and good luck wishes for the contest. Sandra
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