Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

My Puppy Loves

Danny, Ricky, Dave -

Names I’ll carry to the grave.

Chico, Glenn and Chris -

Through junior high, I loved all six!


Aug. 4, 2015

for the Micropoetry ain't that tweet Contest of Casarah Nance
(115 characters if you count spaces between words, according to
what the box tells me when I put this poem inside a comment box)

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Kp Nunez August 8, 2015 at 5:51 AM I didn't get to read this! Hmmmn...I was absent the other day...Had my firstcrush at 6...hahaha. Didn't know about all those things except that we always partnered for dance numbers and all. Drifted apart when the adults started teasing us about it. Sad :(... Couldn't count how many crushes after...lol! Congrats!

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2015 at 2:56 PM ((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK Thanks for stopping by..

Richard Lamoureux August 7, 2015 at 8:15 AM Ha ha, my first puppy love was in grade three, her name was Christine Lago. This is great Andrea, congratulations. Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2015 at 3:57 PM Cool and I remember mine from grade school, way back in first grade. His name was Greg Anson. I can not quite remember all the last names of some of the six! I wanted to add Gus Gustavo into the six but number seven did not fit the rhyme. haha!

Jan Allison August 7, 2015 at 4:37 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley August 7, 2015 at 1:04 AM I absolutely love this, Andrea, much better than my effort. Yours would look great carved into a tree somewhere, anonymously, of course. Congrats, Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 7, 2015 at 12:14 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write Andrea!

Pandita Sietesantos August 6, 2015 at 11:44 PM Congratulations on your great win, Andrea! Very clever write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita

Casarah Nance August 6, 2015 at 8:13 PM Aww nicely done, and leads me to wonder more about the six...maybe for another poem...:)

Daver Austin August 6, 2015 at 3:23 PM Daves are always hot guys, eh? Hardy ho, ho Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Samiha Zubair August 6, 2015 at 10:16 AM So close to heart . Few words say a lot i see in this poem. Nicely written

Len Gasun August 6, 2015 at 8:16 AM :))) Wonderful rhyme my dear friend, Andrea! I enjoyed so much the read! Thanks a lot for sharing and good luck in the contest. Thank you so much as well for your precious time reading my latest simple poem and your lovely comments. Have a great week! love lots, Leonora

James Inman August 6, 2015 at 7:03 AM AAAAAhhhh! So many sweet crushes, at least in my case, not one ever knew. Cute poem.

Shadow Hamilton August 5, 2015 at 4:52 PM delightful Andrea gl in contest hugs 7

Cecilia Macfarlane August 5, 2015 at 3:00 PM This is so sweet and a darling tribute to your beloved puppies. Hugs Cecilia Macfarlane August 5, 2015 at 8:31 PM Really! That is so awesome! Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2015 at 8:17 PM Cecilia, I hope you don't think these were dogs. hahaha. They were FOXES!

Emile Pinet August 5, 2015 at 1:48 PM Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination as your poem pealed away the fluff and exposed a core of reality surrounding your feelings. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 1:52 AM Really Andie.... :D!! cute poem from you! made me smile! =')~Olive Eloisa

Charles Henderson August 5, 2015 at 12:47 AM Careful that truck driver might get jealous. Just put my first poem up in about two months. Shoot me a comment. Poem may be a little far out. Just a mood i'm in.

Nette Onclaud August 5, 2015 at 12:24 AM hmm, you had it realll good with so many crushes, andie... i find this totally winsome.. so finely written.. huggs.. SOUPIE!

Constance La France August 4, 2015 at 8:11 PM Andrea, a sweet write and thanks for visiting my poem, beyond

Lindsay Laurie August 4, 2015 at 6:48 PM G'day Andrea... an interesting format and nicely written - regards - Lindsay

Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 6:08 PM aww cute one Andrea - good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx