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My Puppy

My Puppy

Day one: 
Haiku: always together // here puppy where are you boy // see her all alone

Always together                                                                 
What went wrong?                                                               
Fighting for the pillow made of a feather                            
What went wrong?
Cuddled under cold weather                                           
What went wrong?
Biting on one another                                                                
You two always belong                                                           
Playing with your brother                                     
Barking to any song
Running around your dear mother
She felt something is wrong

Day two: 
Haiku: Over his body // sad to see you went away // blood on car fender.

Today I see my pup alone
Where can you be?
I can sadly hear her moan
Where can you be?
Not stepping out of her zone
Where can you be?
Missing you, my puppy began to roam
My pup can finally see
You have left her alone
Letting out a howl, she is calling me
I ran out of my home
To see, my pup cry a tune so sadly
A pair, you left her alone
For her, I feel so badly
Now she has no one to take her bone
A bowl you to always share
A love for each other so rare
Both came with brown coat medium shaggy hair
I never knew a dog can deeply care
Who said life for a dog is fair?
Sad to know my pup knew she lost her pair.

Day three: 
Haiku: Digging up a hole // my puppy smelled terrible  // rest in peace, dad dig.

((I added a special 3-day haiku when my pup was missing ))
by: P.D.

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Paul Callus May 29, 2015 at 12:04 PM This is very touching Linda. We have different pets at home, and it's always sad when we lose any of them. Hugs // paul

Robin Davis September 20, 2013 at 11:30 AM this is a loving and sad tribute to your furry friend. Each line is filled with love and devotion. The memories you shared will always be in your heart. nice job

Len Gasun February 24, 2013 at 11:58 PM Hello my dearest sis and greatest poet Linda! I'm stopping by here to read once again this unique write of yours. It's really sad when someone you love has left;( Thank you so much for sharing again this gem of yours and for liking my poem too. Thanks a lot again for the win! Congratulations also my dearest sis for a well-done judging of those wonderful contests of yours! Have a good night rest and sleep. Sweetest biggest hugs! love 4ever, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2013 at 11:36 PM PD, that was cool of you doing all those Valentines. Have a really nice one yourself. Let me know what you doooooo

Harry Horsman January 11, 2013 at 2:41 PM oh a softer side of you,,PD, lovely poem...

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2012 at 10:08 PM I remember this sad one. She really died then? You added on the haiku about her. also came here to say, Glad you liked my poem, PD. I didn't know how fast I could come up with a poem like that! But I waited to post it late because I like to space time between my posts. You are bringing down the house in rose poems. GEEEEZ

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 11, 2010 at 7:29 AM just me here saying hi pd :) how have you been? :D

Raymond Tarin October 15, 2010 at 7:45 AM oh this is sad... i love my dogs and its gonna be a sad day when its there time to go... i feel your pain

Junice Lanza August 2, 2010 at 1:25 PM awwwwwwww........how sad. i have a dog. she is a yorkie. she's 3 years old. i love my dog. so does my grandmother. and my grandfather. but this is a really sad poem. awwwwwww....... how terrible.

Lynette Chachere July 31, 2010 at 9:10 PM thats terribly sad Sid. im really sorry that happened to your dog. i can relate. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 22, 2010 at 8:53 AM Wonderful ..good luck P.D. BBF but I cannot views my entry on my poems.. the system deleted it yesterday... its SLAM-VENT... can u see it in your contest? with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 22, 2010 at 7:01 AM P.D. my BBF .. nice blog today.. better than nice.. terrific.. did u cancel your contest? because of all this going on?.. thinking of u .. with luv.. your BBF

Sally Casey July 20, 2010 at 11:47 PM This is really cute! I like it!

Mitch White July 19, 2010 at 6:55 AM It's a good write- Had me all the way- I loved it- Its not a true rhyme- maybe a Blank Verse- I have lost so many dogs- I wish they were smarter- although Ace has been here with me for 8 years now- as stupid as a pit bull is he has managed very well

Veronica Joseph July 18, 2010 at 1:46 PM I am immeasurably sad for you, heartbreaking to lose your dog, just rips your heart out this is an amazing write.

Sarah Hales July 16, 2010 at 11:06 AM its done btween me and doc your turn sweetness !!! we just need a verdict now WHO ONE OUT OF 15 hahahahah sarah x

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 16, 2010 at 7:39 AM look what you made me do-- haha I submitted another unfinished write for a different contest, kidding--- golly this is bad..& I said I should be signing out by now geez... super thanks for adding that thirst to your faves :) & hmm thanks for thinking that, but I think my brain was on overdrive those 2 days-- I stayed awake for 25 hours straight the other day-- my body clock's gone haywire lol-- btw so that'd be green eggs overeasy or not? to go with that spam I mean? or was that slami?? haha

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 16, 2010 at 7:00 AM haha I should be off the computer now but I read your comments-- all I can say is GET READY!! you ain't seen nothing yet pd, that write was a spur of the moment thing (haha I hope I'm not getting ahead of myself here, talk about pressuring myself??)-- haha gonna go slam some spam in the pan now!! later---:p

Constance La France July 16, 2010 at 6:38 AM Wow, Destroyer, this one is sad, our heads and our hearts, are in the same place, if you care to read my poem, In Memory of a Cat, written yesterday, you will understand. Thanks for your comment on my slamming attempt, just to let you know, I will be adding/changing to it before the end, if that is okay, like already I changed the name~~Dear Heart~~

Royal Trevino July 16, 2010 at 6:28 AM Hi, P.D. I will so join your contest =(^.^)=Royal" "

Charles Henderson July 16, 2010 at 12:15 AM soup mail waiting. A slam buddy.

Zack Robinson July 15, 2010 at 10:30 PM i really like this poem. it paints a mental picture and it has good rhyme scheme. id like to thank u for comment on my poems and especially on the one my girlfriend wrote tht made her really smile though she still thought it wasnt very good. once again thank you.

Shirley Bracken July 15, 2010 at 9:34 PM I really enjoyed your poem. Great imagery. Thank you for your kind review. I am looking forward to reading more of your work and finding my way around on the site. I see there are a lot of talented people here. Great work, Shirley

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2010 at 8:46 PM what is Chris talking about here, P.D.? Nice to see you here tonight. Yes, even though I did not really live thru a lot of the stuff I wrote of in that poem (since I was just a baby then), I am pretty sure they WERE the best of the good old days. America has never known such prosperity as it had in that era!!

Susan Mills July 15, 2010 at 11:59 AM Oh how sad. i like how you had day 1,2 ,3 and a haiku for each one with a poem underneath each. That's cool, glad you found your pup. Love, Susan

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