My Promise To You

Chorus X 2
I wish you smell the cologne of my intentions
I wish you hear the piercing rhythms of my heart
I wish you see the torment of your short absence
and also to feel the weight of my promises.

1. Your apples are in need of a worthy taproot
let me jump in and remove anything toxic
of men, you hold unto superstitious factoids
I’m real and the main deal, ready to clear this rash
for every obvious fall, I’ll be your balustrade
and my trust will circle your wishes like minders
a needy heart in emotional tutelage
you think you are fragile? I need to be salvaged
the past and history design your book of fury
my simple touch will make such dark spirit abscond.

Chorus
I wish you smell the cologne of my intentions
I wish you hear the piercing rhythms of my heart
I wish you see the torment of your short absence
and also to feel the weight of my promises.

2. My words fly to other planets and seem pudgy
my actions void of thoughts in need of shame’s wimple
one of the brightest is from a supernova
I’ll make the road clean after so many stumbles
snapshots of my love, portray the highest skylines
our minds and bodies, I will make a whanau
your girlish sight and dreams are not mere postulates
their lasting waterfalls on you, I will lavish
on a dear, life may have a puckish agenda
for your sure escape, I’ll burn to any degree.

Chorus
I wish you smell the cologne of my intentions
I wish you hear the piercing rhythms of my heart
I wish you see the torment of your short absence
and also to feel the weight of my promises.

Bridge X 2
I have spiced it, just eat
I’ve buttered it, just bite
I have milked it, just drink
I have watered, just grow.

Chorus x 2
I wish you smell the cologne of my intentions
I wish you hear the piercing rhythms of my heart
I wish you see the torment of your short absence
and also to feel the weight of my promises.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/9/2017 7:42:00 AM
Such a nice song! I would love it hear them being sang out
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 7:03:00 AM
Very soon! Very soon Kudzai... Thank you so much
Date: 7/5/2017 12:27:00 AM
That sounds like it would be an excellent song. Do you sing Funom?
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 7:03:00 AM
Yeah, I sing Maria.. Thank you so much
Date: 7/4/2017 2:15:00 PM
- Oh, a great song ... would like to hear it with music and a wonderful voice, Funom :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/12/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Sunshine Smile
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