My Promise

I’m not a flower child, 
neither a sage, poet or bard.
I wont feed you with guile
or hit you hard
with the absurd,
laced between sweet word.


I’ll not promise you an hour
and then give only a minute,
letting precious love go sour….
reaching the limit,
disposing love,
much as an ill fitting glove.


I promise to give my all.
If you need me, I stand 
within reach of your call,
on demand,
loved, free,
doing my best to agree.


I’m not a flower child,
neither a sage, poet or bard.
No sweet words sugar piled.
Old and charred,
my life…
the pleasure of my wife. 

©  Dec 2010  Charles Henderson
     For Paula's -Just poetry contest 5th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Duffin Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Hi Charles. Thanks for the honour bestowed on me in your contest. Best of luck with this in the contest. You are right, honesty and love are some of the greatest gifts we can give. Thanks again and joy and peace to you. Eamon
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Charles. Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 4:09 AM
Nice ending of the life described -that is pleasure of your wife, Charles. Good luck in the contest,
Radke Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Oh very good Charles. Very good writing. Best wishes in the contest. Deb
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December 27, 2010 at 8:50 PM
awesome this is Charles, good luck in contest, Harry
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