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within the walls of my mind spins a galaxy the neon nebulae a cosmos turning and churning spinning stars spitting meteor showers asteroids and meteoroids twirling satellites of a reality on a whim drifting in the sea of night floating barely avoiding collision with the supernova of wonders and what ifs Submitted on October 10, 2020 for contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (24) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST and on September 14, 2020 for contest MY PRIVATE UNIVERSE sponsored by JULIA WARD

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Date: 10/12/2020 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your write and picture. "Wonderful" Your line, "within the walls of my mind" speaks volumes. Enjoy your win.............
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Date: 10/12/2020 2:09:00 PM
Thank , Paula. Most appreciated ~
Date: 10/11/2020 9:25:00 PM
...to culmination of that last wonderful line! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/12/2020 5:39:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 10/11/2020 7:52:00 PM
Line what a journey you have created with this wonderful metaphoric wonderland! Love it
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Date: 10/11/2020 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lonna. Much appreciated ~
Date: 9/14/2020 4:33:00 PM
"Spinning stars spitting meteor showers," "reality on a whim," "avoiding collision with the supernova," - what wonderful images and beautifully spun metaphor, Line. This is sure to be a winner! All the best for the contest!
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Date: 9/15/2020 11:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Sam.
Date: 9/14/2020 11:19:00 AM
So beautifully done, Line! Panagiota xx
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Date: 9/15/2020 11:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated~
Date: 9/14/2020 8:50:00 AM
Line, i can easily imagine you doing joyful pirouettes in the center of your private universe. Enjoyed...
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Date: 9/15/2020 11:41:00 AM
LOL thanks, Richard. Agility is all in the mind ~