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"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." -Eleanor Roosevelt My aspirations keep me whole. Your love replenishes my soul. Negativity will decrease. Merciful Lord please grant me peace. My future now, is in your hands. My heart accepts and understands. All sorrow I can now release. Merciful Lord please grant me peace. In the beautiful dreams I weave, I now most steadfastly believe. Hopes for my future now increase. Merciful Lord please grant me peace. My dream seems to forecast my life. Dreaming keeps me calm, without strife. My life could be a masterpiece. Merciful Lord please grant me peace.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/17/2023 11:02:00 AM

Another uplifting kryelle SV! :)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/17/2023 3:29:00 PM

Oh thank you Linda, so glad you like it. They are a form so easy to write. I was surprised. I dont consider this form as torturing a poem as I do some of the weird and wonderful poetry forms I have tried to master, Where I think "If you just let me write it MY WAY it would be so much better." lol .. but silence speaks volumes I guess !!! Have a good week end my friend.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/15/2023 10:54:00 PM

Beautiful, so calming and graceful - I may try something similar - inspiring x

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/16/2023 2:56:00 AM

Its pretty easy DD. I had to write 2. I didnt lable it correctly and Sotto Poet read it and commented on it, so I had to delete it from the contest and write another. This is the second one. Glad you liked it.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2023 7:32:00 PM

A beautifully written prayer! Blessings, Kim M

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/15/2023 8:06:00 PM

Thank you Kim, I really appreciate you reading it and taking the time to comment.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/15/2023 5:13:00 PM

Hymn of lament so purely divine, you made this form look easy with such a graceful and remorseful Kyrielle. :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/18/2023 9:38:00 AM

These new rules are hard to get used to, it's lot's of work fixing, stressful!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/15/2023 5:34:00 PM

You are too sweet. I had to write 2 !!! I forgot to Title the first one appropiately and the judge read it and commented on it, so I had to remove it from the contest and write another..lol I will learn to read one of these days!! Thank you for your lovely comment. Most appreciated.