My Prayer

“Im standing on the side of the road,
Leaning against my car.
I can look far,
Cars comes by,
But I don’t say hi
Im staring at the sky.
It’s a beautiful sunset
You can still see the mountains.
The sky is orange, gray and blue.
There are a couple of stars,
But there where one
It was the brightest one from them all
And I wondered……………wondered ,
if that was my sign.
I read what I wrote,
And felt something in my throat.
I realized it’s time to pray.”
DEAR GOD 
PLEASE FORGIVE ME FROM ALL MY SINS.
PLEASE SAVE ME FROM THIS.
HOLD YOUR ARMS AROUND ME.
PLEASE LEAD ME ALL THE WAY.
“I felt this warm feeling around my body,
And I knew HE was waiting for this.
My smile came back,
This is my second whack.


Looking up at the dark sky
Looking at that bright light.
And all I could say was”
THANK YOU LORD
AMEN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/21/2010 7:05:00 PM
great write, i loved this one
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Date: 5/21/2010 9:49:00 AM
I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Kobus. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:18:00 AM
What an uplifting and interesting write, we have poems that share titles if you get a chance give "My Prayer" a look.
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Date: 5/21/2010 1:24:00 AM
Wow, very uplifting Kobus, thank you for the reminder that we are blessed! God Bless you Wilma
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Date: 5/21/2010 12:49:00 AM
THANK U 4 THE UP LIFTING, PRAYER THIS MONING. BLESS U,,IRMA
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