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I'm not putting down anybody's style here .                                                                                    I'm just explaining why I write the way I do.                                                                                      I'm jest havin' fun y'all.

My Poems

I believe good poetry,
Is easy on the mind.
Not hard to understand at all,
No hidden fruits to find.

No words so big you'd have to use,
A college dictionary,
To understand what I have writ,
Or ask some visionary,

To explain the meanings,
Hidden in the words.
To try to be too "artsy",
Would make me look absurd.

I talk about my life and loves,
My opinions I unfurl;
The things that lift my spirit,
And what makes me want to hurl.

I want my poems to be fun,
And interesting to read;
To be nourishing and wholesome,
The mind and spirit feed.

I want them to be easily read,
No confusing drivel.
My words are plainly spoken,
'Cause I've no time for riddles.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Makanda Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 4:17 PM
Love how your work is straightforward yet artistic at the same time.
Lowe Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 3:23 PM
ONE! PEACE AND LOVE! Thus it is in the Onederful Oneness of the Onement of the divine wisdom and love of healing enjoying words of awareness that are shared from the cistern of the WORD.
Wolf Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 7:33 PM
We are who we are who we are. Because it's so hard to be who we aren't. (Ask all those poor 'stars' who die before 40 or 30 from overdoses). Enjoyed your straightforward approach, Judy. Happy New Year to you and yours! ~ Gershon
Ball Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Thanks bunches Gershon. God Bless and a much blessed New Year to you and yours. JB
Downing  Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 12:50 PM
I enjoy just the way you write and I’m with you on them easy read... I love your poem :)
Ball Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Thank you so much Akkina. God Bless, JB
Devonshire Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Amen to your message, Judy!! If a poem requires repeated use of a dictionary to understand, I usually just move on to another one. This will be a fave for me because I feel so strongly about this. Very sorry to hear about your appendix. It must have been incredibly painful and I'm glad you are well now and back with us. Here's to better times in the new year, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn
Ball Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Thanks bunches Carolyn. God Bless, JB
Mcintosh Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Lovely writing. God Bless you always
Ball Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 6:36 AM
Thanks bunches Regina. God Bless, JB
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:59 AM
I prefer poems which are not 'heavy' on the mind; there is beauty in simplicity. Keep on writing how it suits you most, Judy. Regards // paul ~~ ps. hope you get well soon
Ball Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Thanks so much Paul. God Bless, JB
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January 2, 2021 at 11:02 PM
Normally I write as I feel depending on the mood. Yet I love simplicity too. Happy New Year Judy.
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 11:10 PM
Thanks bunches Victor. Same to you and yours. God Bess, JB
Laurie Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:52 PM
Hello Judy … oh yes. It’s such a drag to be halted half way through a poem by a not understood word or phrase. You are spot on here Judy - thank you - Lindsay
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 11:14 PM
Thanks so much Lindsay. God Bless, JB
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January 2, 2021 at 6:55 PM
I feel the same way as you, I like it simple, no hidden between the lines. I have to be slapped to understand the meaning. Oh, Judy, I hope your ok an appendix rupturing is not something to play with. Get well soon.. I just got back too from acute pancreatitis for a gallbladder stone blocking the pancreases. Then tested positive for Covid before they let me in.. I still have to have surgery to remove the gallbladder which will be very simple, I just wished they would have done it then. Stay health. Hugs Eve
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 8:07 PM
Thanks so much Eve. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:28 PM
love your style and my poetry is also simple i can relate as I dont like to have to constantly use a dictionary or try to understand something only the writer does. write on Judy:-) hugs Jan xx
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Thanks so much Jan. God Bless , JB
Summers Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:11 PM
Enjoyed the poem very much. I like your approach to your poetry.
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:36 PM
Thanks so much J. God Bless, JB
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