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My poem titles Your love light shines Dancing in the moonlight Tender is the night When you know it's right Happiness is found My heart has found a home By now you should know The power of love When you know it's right There are no words When you close your eyes I'll always be there Love goes on forever Just keep holding on By now you should know You're worthy of love When you close your eyes The sun will rise again Tender is the night I'll always be there Happiness is found When you know it's right The rest of my life Love goes on forever Just keep holding on The sun will rise again Love goes on forever I'll always be there I can't believe you're here There are no words I think it must be love Happiness is found! John Derek Hamilton June 10.2017

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 6/20/2017 4:59:00 AM

How did you manage to write it so lyrically! After all you are the king of lyrics in Poetrysoup's community. It's impeccable, John. Congrats on your win.

John Hamilton
Date: 6/20/2017 10:55:00 AM

Thanks Afzal, I do appreciate your kind comments and visit!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/19/2017 11:21:00 PM

Many congratulations on your first place win, John:) love always comes first:)

John Hamilton
Date: 6/20/2017 10:54:00 AM

You're right Jo, love always comes first, congrats on your win also!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/19/2017 10:37:00 PM

Congratulations John. I'm so happy to see this receive first placement! : )

John Hamilton
Date: 6/20/2017 10:53:00 AM

Thanks Connie, was a nice surprise, yours did well also, nice to see!

Joseph May

Date: 6/19/2017 5:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win John

John Hamilton
Date: 6/19/2017 10:14:00 PM

Thanks Joseph, nice surprise!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/19/2017 4:01:00 PM

You got a first place this time John! Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 6/19/2017 10:13:00 PM

Thanks Jan!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/17/2017 11:51:00 PM

John, no one would ever guess that these were the titles of your poems. They fit so perfectly together in every stanza. You did a really splendid job on this entry and I'm sure that it will be noticed! : )

John Hamilton
Date: 6/19/2017 10:13:00 PM

Thanks Connie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2017 3:00:00 PM

It is so cool , JOhn, how you repeated some of the lines to reinforce the message of your love poem. Very nicely done. I hope to hurry and do a poem for this contest!! soupmail question.

John Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2017 6:04:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I do appreciate your visit and nice comment!

Maria Williams

Date: 6/14/2017 11:08:00 AM

This would have been a huge task to write all those titles into a Lyric which masterfully makes sense and all fits together. Wow! - you must know a lot of songs - but of course you are a song writer - but all the same a difficult task. I wouldn't have attempted it...Maria

John Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2017 12:15:00 PM

Thanks Maria, yeah it was an enormous task, just selecting which lyrics to use, but the romantic themes seems to always stand out too me. Thanks for the nice compliment!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/13/2017 9:41:00 AM

Masterful weave of song titles, John. Great creativity on this loving poem. Splendid write, my friend. Love always.

John Hamilton
Date: 6/13/2017 12:33:00 PM

Thanks Freddie, I appreciate your visit and wonderful comment!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/12/2017 8:51:00 AM

Great way to combine the titles into a beautiful poem, John, the lines repeated in different stanzas adds to the beauty:)

John Hamilton
Date: 6/12/2017 10:57:00 AM

Thanks Jo, this was a challenge but glad you liked it, hope the sponsor does too, thanks for the nice comment!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/11/2017 8:05:00 AM

You have done a nice one here with your titles John :) Good luck in the contest!

John Hamilton
Date: 6/11/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thanks Heidi, let's see if the sponsor agrees with you!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/10/2017 10:16:00 PM

I see that your writes are romantic by your titles. Good luck in the contest....

John Hamilton
Date: 6/11/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thanks Eve for the visit and nice comment!

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/10/2017 6:37:00 PM

Smartly done, John. Reads like a winner. Great titles:) There are a lot of people who will argue, that a great title is what sells the poem.

John Hamilton
Date: 6/10/2017 8:23:00 PM

Yeah Danny I always try to have a great title, at least grab the attention, the challenge is bringing up the poem to measure up to the title, thanks for the visit, take care!

Tim Smith

Date: 6/10/2017 5:23:00 PM

You scored big with titles John...it pays to have a good title

John Hamilton
Date: 6/10/2017 5:26:00 PM

Yeah if only the poem measures up to the title that's the trick, thanks for the visit Tim, hope you're feeling better!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2017 5:18:00 PM

aww what a beautiful romantic poem John - I have done a bawdy poem with some of my titles but a more serious one will be posted tomorrow. Its fun looking back over the titles we have used!:-) good luck in the contest

John Hamilton
Date: 6/10/2017 5:25:00 PM

Thanks Jan, not sure now about contest got a big NA from her last time, well keep trying!lol