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My Plea

Silver moon, Oh sacred moon
Cast your healing grace

Don't hide from me
Please hear my plea

Just slid aside
your shroud of clouds
I need your beam's embrace
It is my saving grace
For the earth who spawned me
Incarnate me in the wrong place
And now I'm bind in this monstrosity

Every night you're up there
Sometimes hidden in your veil
But you see how I suffer
from the lashes of my agony
Unload this burden
Reap this grain of soul
through the sharpness
of your crescent scythe
And set it floating
in your heaven's vault

There as a star
you transmute my soul
As I wait for the earth
In planting my spirit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/10/2010 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Juan. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:24:00 PM
Juan, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:32:00 AM
Hello Juan, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Juan. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 4:15:00 PM
This is so beautiful. I came down to see your very first poem posted here and since I posted my moon poem today, I found one about the moon that you did too. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 6/22/2010 1:19:00 PM
Stoping by this poem again, you have mighty interesting poems. I think iam going to have fun reading them all in the next two days. This poem read better the second time around. Juan, awesome and cleaver, have yourself a nice one,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/21/2010 11:05:00 PM
:) Love this poem the Moon what an awesome subject is it not? Forever more, Jaye Estre
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Date: 6/21/2010 2:49:00 AM
This is really beautifully written, Juan! I can't help but be reminded of my poem--it seems to be quite similar, addressing the moon, though yours seem more passionate ;) --check out Whispered Wishes (revised) & I hope you'll see what I mean ;) --nikko :) btw thank you for all your comments, glad you like them :)
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:22:00 AM
Tnks for your sweet comment..Juan!beautiful verses!Celene
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:34:00 AM
the romantic write, enjoyed a sweet read for me this morning,..p.d.
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:13:00 AM
enjoyed--you have talent! Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 4/19/2010 11:05:00 PM
Beautiful poem,Welcome to P.S..Charma
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Date: 4/19/2010 6:50:00 AM
Very cool, enjoyed that a lot!
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Date: 4/19/2010 3:34:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Juan. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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