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My Perfect Type of You, Bipolar

Can I love and will I ever feel want,
Smooth skin, soft with a perfect line.
I stand in the castle upon a sheer hill,
The castle of my own confine.

It’s a chilling reflection on water at night,
From our living, breathing full moon.
You’re my eye of the storm sitting in the middle,
Of a raging swirling typhoon.

I cascade and I spiral out of control,
Inside I’m every beautiful crazy rainbow.
Floating alone not steering deep down,
Free falling through my silent grotto.

When I drown you’re my air in a bubble you live,
Floating through space in the open and blue.
My quarter past ten in the greenest of forests,
You're my timber, my perfect type of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/25/2016 1:50:00 PM
Bipolar this is not. It is artistry at a universal level. It's the gifted and highly creative. When you suppress your emotions and don't turn them into art that's when the fire storm starts.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/25/2016 3:34:00 PM
Hi holly, I tried to describe the emotional and mental loss of control in the mind of bipolar with this write, I hope its somewhere close. Thanks for ur comment :)
Date: 6/29/2016 11:35:00 PM
Gosh, this is so interesting. I am left wondering if the bipolar is a different person or if you are loving that aspect of your own self, which would be so amazing because it would show such a positive attitude. a great write, Lewis!!
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 6/29/2016 11:40:00 PM
thanks Andrea, it's all me until the last line, when it's my perfect partner
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